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Reviews for When Two Are One

By : rachxoxo
  • From erospandora on September 19, 2007
    These two chapters seem ever so slightly different than your others i can't place exactly how but they are. I still like them and all and its great. I wonder however how the elves ....... ick.... are going about their... time i thought they lived to serve?

    Anyway keep it up and omg ick elves!

    ~Ero
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 19, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 8! Nice way to wind up in his bed!
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  • From AloneintheOpen on September 19, 2007
    Way to keep us coming back for more. I like this a lot because you've kept them both very much in character, which is hard to do when they're foils of each other, and are supposed to actually be able to sustain a relationship. So kudos for that.
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  • From AloneintheOpen on September 12, 2007
    A nice cliffhanger for a boy who so desperately wants to know what happens next.
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  • From ZooArmy on September 12, 2007
    Let me guess. You want to make us all believe that Draco will sleep with Harry in one bed and we all get edgy for hot-steamy man on man action, but actually the next chapter will start with Draco leaving grimmauld place to get back to malfoy manor. HA! I'm right, huh? I saw through your little devilish plot, didn't i? GO ME! If I'm mistaken and you really let sleep Draco in Harry's bed (with Harry there as well, of course) I will love you forever and a day!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 12, 2007
    yeahhh!!:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2007
    Now this was ever so great. The story is getting better with every chapter. Your writing is so incredibly intense, it makes me laugh, makes me furious, makes be sad - amazing!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 12, 2007
    Soooo need ch 7!
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  • From Extraho on September 11, 2007
    this is really good, and realistic- just a bonus as its actually fiction,. daisy and kreatcher= yuch
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  • From Tokyogirl21 on September 11, 2007
    I love the story so far. I think angst is a good thing but I hope it doesn't last too long. And ewwww house elf sex. Update soon
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  • From bananasforyou on September 11, 2007
    eeeww omg the elves blah but funny. want more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 11, 2007
    OMG!!! I sooo didn't need to know about house elf sex! Though I would like chapter 6!
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  • From MelMel1982 on September 11, 2007
    OMG!! I love this!! I haven't read much lately cuz of DH... I swear that book messed me up! But I can't wait for an update on this.

    And EW! I'm scarred for life!!! House elves having sex??!! That's just plain wrong.... **shuder**

    Oh and btw... I caught the beetlejuice reference in chapter four. I was totally ROTFLMAO!!!! I loved it!

    Great job and keep up the awesome work!!
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  • From erospandora on September 11, 2007
    OMG NOOOO Elf sex with EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw
    -gouges out eyes-
    i think i might be sick..........
    Nice way of trying to get Draco to open up... i wonder what he saw and what he's hiding ...
    oh yeah did i mention EW elf spunk!


    Update soon
    ~Ero
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  • From ZooArmy on September 10, 2007
    Oh god, thank you so much you didn't go in too much detail with the elf-sex. *shudders* Why did you write about elf sex instead of H/D sex, huh? Please! And the , i don't know what it's called, dream? illusion? hallucination? anyway, the massage was good, tehe and that he'd tripped was even better. *chuckle*
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