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Reviews for A Determined Frame of Mind

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From thrnbrooke on October 22, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 17!!!
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on October 20, 2007
    OoOoO! Teh plot thickens! I hope Draco's slighly wobbly masterminding goes the way he wants it to. And brave Harry with his pensive... I liked the establishment of boundries in this chapter and how Draco allowed Harry his own freedom whilst reassuring him of his fears.

    I hope that Draco does go back to psyche-diving in the future because the portrayal of his skill (and the fact he knew he was good) combined with the fact he still has to fight for respect in a profession he essentially created was interesting for this character. Plus, I can visualise Draco psyche-diving with the same kind of distaste that tourists use when swimming in particularily cold sea, because its not Harry's mind...hehe!

    And, of course, because it deserves a mention, Harry and Draco doing the do....OOOOh!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on October 19, 2007
    Interesting. I have to say that I didn't see Draco confronting the minister coming. I definitely like how your story is progressing. Please update again soon.
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  • From LadyKatie on October 19, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter! I liked all the stuff with the Minister. Can't wait to see Harry push that little straight voice out of his head! :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 19, 2007
    I was soooo afraid that the minister was onto Draco! Sooo need chapter 16!
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  • From ANON - Myra on October 16, 2007
    Ooooh, I pity Batty, but at the same time I'm glad that Draco did that. Her continuous presence could be dangerous. I hope with her not being under Draco's order would not make her useful to the Minister and his cronies. Moving on, it's good that Eugenie is on their side now, she's useful. Besides, the more allies, the better. And gods, if it's not the Minister himself. I wonder how Draco's going to handle him. But knowing Draco, plus the Slytherin in him, I bet he can use that as an opportunity. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Kaspjo on October 15, 2007
    Wow, I love how you write Harry. I always took him as the kind of guy who has problems trusting anyone to begin with. This is purely enjoyable for the simple fact that Draco is trying to get Harry to do something I don't think he's ever truly done. I love it.
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on October 15, 2007
    Alright! First of all, I love the chapter title. It was both funny and *true*. I thought Draco -was- magnificant in this and his version of wham, bam thank you ma'am with Eugenie was excellent! I liked the fact he's a one mind man now he's been in Harry's, a lovely and slightly strange show of fidelity from Draco. And I cannot tell you how much the image of Lucius shoving a woman into a fireplace has made my day...

    The ball is really rolling now with this story and I found myself tingling with excitement by the end of the chapter with all the possibilities, Harry taking charge with his pensive (??), Draco having convinced another (brilliant) ally, the dastard minister appearing! And I think I saw you write in one of your review replies or notes or somthing that Batty was going to come into play a bit later on in a different way, so if thats true, intruiged about that.

    Oo! And I'm interested in the idea of the curse affecting House Elves as well, that adds a little spin on things.

    Looking forward to next chapter!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 15, 2007
    Sooo hope Draco knows what he's doing! I can't wait for chapter 15!
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  • From ANON - Myra on October 12, 2007
    Omg. I didn't have the time to review for the last chapter. My apology! And thank you for chapter 13! You made me cry, again. It was sooo sad, I actually felt Harry's pain. And Ron's and Hermione's too, even though they still couldn't trust him, but they were hurt by Harry's words nonetheless. I thought that Harry was just soo strong, despite the fact that he was just as fragile at the same time. And I was glad that he let everything out, even if his best friends' memories were obliviated in the end. It was extremely hard for him, and right now I'm just happy that Draco's by his side now. Great chapter.
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  • From LadyKatie on October 12, 2007
    Excellent chapter! I feel so bad for Ron and Hermione... not as much as Harry having suffered all this time, but it must be so confusing for them to think Harry has turned into this person they think he's become. And then to see him with Draco... well they couldn't very well come to any different conclusions than they did. And Harry not knowing if he's "straight, bent or curved." I giggled a little when I read that. I like that he's OK with not having to define himself like that and he's just going with what feels right. Good job!
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on October 12, 2007
    I did enjoy this chapter and I thought it was at least heart aching to hear Harry verbalise all the pain he's had to bear at the way his friends had treated him. I liked the battle between the knowledge that it wasn't their fault and the hurt he felt anyway, and I thought it was good that he sort of enjoyed yelling, because that's a human type reaction and it helped develop with the re-emerging determination and fight of Harry.

    The little promises of Harry and Draco and the potential they have to last was good too, they gave me a happy little zing here and there. And I'm looking forward to Draco being Master!Plan man!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 11, 2007
    Oh Batty is going to regret that! I soooo need chapter 14!
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  • From riddlestar on October 11, 2007
    yay!! finally the good stuff..heheh..please continue~
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on October 09, 2007
    Talk about dun dun dun! This was another chapter where everything seemed to go so well and this time I really felt glad for *Draco*. Before I was so pleased about Harry getting all the good things he deserved and this chapter was like a reward for Draco, after putting so much effort into being there for Harry, because I think he earnt all the progress and acheivement he got in this chapter!

    I'm worried though. You write mature and enthralling drama/romance and that means that sometimes the characters have to go through some pain and after two chapters where the good outweighed the bad, and with Ron and Hermione's arrival... I'm afraid the next chapter is going to get a bit heart wrenching. I shall enjoy it regardles of course, but I think I'm going to read the last two chapters before I move on to the next one you post, for moral support! Whatever it is though, I look forward to it.
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