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Reviews for A Determined Frame of Mind

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From riddlestar on October 04, 2007
    yay!! now draco can finally get past harry's self denial...heheeh.. well, im hoping at least. finally they have someone else on their side.. i quite like Lila. anyway, update soon~
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  • From LadyKatie on October 03, 2007
    Excellent chapter! My only complaint was that it wasn
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  • From ANON - Myra on October 02, 2007
    Wow! Niceee. Lila knew the truth now, this is GREAT. I'm so glad they have a new ally. I'm happy for Harry! And and, I wonder what Draco will do/say to Harry? XD. Definitely can't wait for the next one. :)
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  • From Kaspjo on October 02, 2007
    Ok ok, So Draco can rape someone's mind. I concede, geez. Show off.

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  • From ANON - McAbacus on October 02, 2007
    He wants you Harry! He does! I hope next chapter we see team persuasion Draco as you do so well. I so want Harry to believe just a little bit that Draco is genuinly interested. And I punched the air when Lila was persuaded. Victory (of sorts)!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 30, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 10! I hope this plan works? Will Lila help them?
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  • From ANON - Nice Non Linear on September 29, 2007
    Harry really pulled off his Draco Malfoy disguise. How cute, his learning the mannerisms, character, and walk!

    I loved Draco's explaination of Harry's fame, symbolism, and the reason people hold in high regard. It was a good and easy to understand breakdown. I think this is the first time I've seen such a full explaination in a fan fiction while also making concessions that 'though maybe it shouldn't be this way--it is'.

    "Do you understand? You have to deal with the gap they see between you and the rest, whether or not it
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  • From ANON - Myra on September 29, 2007
    Gah! My review was cut short again. So continue: And he helped Harry (well technically he was helping Draco, but yeah, one way or another).. Snape can really be a great ally in the future, who knows. I wonder if Snape would be able to break the curse too? I mean afterall he's one of the most accomplished Occlumens, and a powerful Legilimens. It'd be great, though, if he could. Great chapter as usual! :)
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  • From ANON - Myra on September 29, 2007
    Mmm .. interesting chapter. Hahaa, can't imagine Harry acting like Draco. Should be fun, afterall he might never get the same chance again. ;D I really liked it when Draco said "Only Harry". Such great words came from Draco, and sweet too. Oh and serves that superior-attitude auror right. But I wonder if Lila might ever side with Harry and Draco (she really hates Dark Magic right?) .. but I can't really see that happening, at least not until they break the curse. I dunno .. you're full of surprises, I can't help but guessing.. well try to anyways, lol. Wonder what Harry (and Draco) plans to do to her, though. Probably trying to get the Harry Potter file? I really liked the whole idea of Snape being away and all. And he helped Harry
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  • From Dezra on September 29, 2007
    Nice cliff hanger. Intriguing story. What is their plan? I hope that Snape comes back to the wizarding world at least for the rest of the story.
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  • From rafiq on September 28, 2007
    That was a great chapter. This, like your other stories, just gets better as it progresses. One brilliant plot turn after another.
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on September 28, 2007
    You should be thinking of a plan that will begin your revenge on Scrimgeour, not thinking about how his earlobes will taste.

    yes, please, and thank you! I think thats my favourite line so far. And you brought in The Snape, things can only get better from here (for the reader, I realise the inclusion of Snape on top of all he is suffering means Harry might not necessarily see things as getting better)!

    And bless saviour-what-saviour?Harry, a very canon attitude to take I think. I look forward to seeing how this latest plan pans out, I am tres intruiged.
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  • From ANON - McAbacus on September 26, 2007
    It -did- give me shivers, especially that beautiful bit at the end, where Harry summons up enough courage to finally accept Draco's gift of a bit of soul (I want one of them for christmas!) and they're just standing there with their hands over each oher's chests. I could -see- it and I think it was a rare moment in fanfic, an in-character, romantic moment without cliche and really very lovely!

    I also like honourable!Draco and how he wants to get Harrys feelings fairly, cos that would be best. I'm just enjoying the disdain he has for everyone else compared to how earnest he is in wanting Harry. Fun!

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  • From ANON - Myra on September 25, 2007
    The chapter we've been waiting for indeed! That was MAGNIFICENT! I'm feeling so satisfied right now xD. I felt so good saying FINALLY! to myself, lol. And wow, the Minister himself eh? Who would have thought. But all the clues made sense. I'm surprised I hadn't thought it was him. Poor Harry, he certainly didn't deserve to be cursed like that, especially NOT by his own Minister whose country was saved by HARRY himself. I mean by Voldemort, yes, but out of all the people.. D: I seriously despise that dumb minister no, so bloody cruel. And the Draco-Harry's conversation was breathtaking! I was amused myself when Harry took back his words, the part when he told Draco he wanted that piece of soul that he was gifted with to stay. It's like, finally Harry! You finally starting to appreciate Draco's soul! XD I'm soo glad that Harry had accepted Draco somewhat though.. loved this chapter soooo much! I'm now feeling the need to say thanks, so yes, THANK YOU! Hehehe.
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  • From ANON - More Anon on September 25, 2007
    Scrigemor is probably hopping mad and indignent about Harry now. He was stupid and dumb before now he is probably running high off of Cassandra Curse induced hate and disgust. He is just as bad as Voldemort and nearing on worse than Moldywort. Contemplating what the man was/is thinking in itself is maddening. I see why Draco was so enraged.
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