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By : Extraho
  • From MidnightWhisper on December 13, 2007
    I was overjoyed to find that this site had Fenrir/Harry stories. That you for a great read I enjoyed the tome i spent reading it. So what is Lupin's real nature like in your story. What will happen to Fenrir? Keep up the good work. take care and Blessed Be.
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on December 12, 2007
    Ahh! That was better!
    But seriously Fenrir survives right?? Please let the poor little innocent cub live!!
    Great story so far. I only recently found myself interested in Fenrir/Harry fics, but this one i top quality!!
    Hope you'll let either Fenrir or Harry kill off Remus. He seriously betrayed his werewolf!

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Miracle on December 12, 2007
    I love the fic' so far. God I hope Dumbledore dies! I really hope that Fenrir and Harry/Logan's(?) child survives. That would be sooo sad. If it's not to much trouble, could you e-mail me when the next chapter is up? I'm not sure if I'll be able to read the rest of this otherwise.

    As I said, awesome story. Update soon!
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  • From Auroawinter on December 08, 2007
    Im loving this story, and I hope you continue it. Looking forward to the next chappie

    Ja ne
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  • From Wilder on December 08, 2007
    *pathetic sob* oh my god, Fenrir!! is the baby okay? is Fenrir okay? is Harry going to kill them all brutally?! please! huh huh, will he? grr, Remus you suck, i usually love you but now you suck! crazy turn this fic took, totally didn't see it going this way from that first alley way sexcapade... oh and the author of "building with worn out tools" is Lomonaaeren, if you were interested, for your recommended reading... i agree with it all! lol
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  • From bumblebee on December 07, 2007
    update! i need updatess!!

    pleaseeee, i need to know if fenrir will be ok and i want to know what harry will do to those mean people
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  • From ANON - wind on December 07, 2007
    update soon
    dang
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  • From PrissKimio on December 06, 2007
    I am so happy that you updated. But I am not happy that you put Fenir in to hospital. I thought Harry/Logan would go crazy and beat Remus. I hope you wont kill Remus and let him see "the light". I thought that Harrys relationship with Hermione isnt good ande here he called her Mione. Hope you will update soon.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on December 06, 2007
    An end to the story? Fenrir and Nicko are healed, Fenrir's pup is or isn't saved, Harry plots revenge with his family, they get revenge, Harry and Fenrir and Nicko and new pup if it survives live happily ever after. If new pup doesn't survive, maybe Fenrir gets preggers again just before you end it. Sound good? Or at least doable? I dunno, it's just a thought I had. As for the review of this chapter, I'm surprised he didn't kill Moony off right then and there. And what is this about Fenrir not being able to turn him as he's younger than Remus? Wow! Even if Fenrir's the 'good guy' in a fic, he's always been Remus' sire. I like the change, it's nice. Using his Boy-Who-Lived status to get treatment for his mate and pup is an excellent idea, one I definitely would have used if I had been Harry. Please, keep up the wonderful work. I love this completely new outlook on a Fenrir/Harry fic. Actually, it's a Harry/Fenrir fic, which I've never seen before. Love it! ~dpa06~
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  • From ANON - Spacious on December 05, 2007
    OHH MY GOD THAT.... was completely worth waiting for
    seriously that was awesome. AHHH i cant wait for the
    next and for some reason i knew today was going to be
    good and here we are with a story ive been dying to
    read. May i have some more?!?!?!?!
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  • From gweasley on December 05, 2007
    Wow I have so looked fowared to this chapter. The best part was it was every bit as good as I hoped it would be. I hope you update soon, I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Tats on December 05, 2007
    Oh my gosh! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Do you have a beta? I caught I few mistakes, but I think the plot line is awsome, and flowing pretty smoothly. Yay!
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  • From ANON - wind on November 30, 2007
    bad cat
    bad cat
    love the story
    please get a charger soon

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  • From kcgx23 on November 30, 2007
    Will you continue the story, I love it.
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  • From on November 29, 2007
    I was wondering when you're going to update?
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