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  • From ANON - goldenslumbers on October 23, 2007
    Oh oh oh!! I had no clue it was going to be Sirius, but I'm so glad it is! Yay for Sirius/Draco sex! And poor Draco's baby! I really love how totally different this story is!
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  • From wump615 on October 23, 2007
    I like that it was Sirius, but if that baby is really gone I'm getting my torches and pitch fork out of storage.
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  • From Wilder on October 23, 2007
    i knew the baby would be fine and i guessed that it was either sirius or a weasley... another good chapter, you are bring up some interesting ideas
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  • From ProfessorSibly on October 23, 2007
    YES!!! I Was Hoping that Sirius was Draco's lover!!

    PLEASEEE Let Sirius, Remus, and Tonks go to the dark side... I would LOVE that, and Tonks would be Awesome as a dark witch/Spy. ^.^
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  • From kcgx23 on October 23, 2007
    Now that was a pairing I didn't see coming, fabulous chapter. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Amee on October 23, 2007
    YESSSSSSSS!!! GO SIRIUS!!!!!
    -cough- excuse me. Wonderful chapter! I was so worried that Draco was going to be with Severus. (I love Sev and all but he is used too much) I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From PrissKimio on October 23, 2007
    I have to say your story is a little bit fast. I understand that some people know about him (that he is a Malfoy) but to jump a relationship with his father that is too much. And what about his mother? Isnt she crazy because Lily took him away from her when he was just born?

    Sirius is nothing great. I would have liked more if it was Sirius/Lucius. That would be great. I mean that Draco could be really Sirius son afterall you mentioned that Lucius is not angry at Draco for his pregnancy.

    Sorry for the flames but I really like your story and I am not even sure if you read our reviews.
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  • From ANON - El on October 23, 2007
    I like it ^_^
    A bit underdeveloped, as far as conflict, but an enjoyable read nevertheless. My advice would be to make sure you insert some struggle, beyond Ginny's girly attempts to keep Harry, and make them harder to resolve. It's a bit too easy for him right now, one author to another. Still, tons of potential here ^_^
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  • From lazycrazykitten on October 23, 2007
    Sirius? Wow. I didn't expect that.
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  • From KimothytheSage on October 22, 2007
    omg youre such a bitch. that was so mean. i hate cliffies. update soon! ill give you a beer! or cookies.. whatever just update the friggin story.
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  • From xhedwigx on October 22, 2007
    So neat, bloody wicked,& me likes it update soon pleassssssssse
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  • From toads70 on October 21, 2007
    amazing chapters!! i can't wait for the next one...hope draco's baby is okay
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  • From sanda on October 20, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From bumblebee on October 19, 2007
    Is draco going to miscarry?! Noooo!!!

    And who is the other father? I reaallly want to know

    Fenrir? Where's Fenrir?

    You have to update soon!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on October 19, 2007
    "Damn those beaters"? No. Damn that author! *groans loudly* Why, why?! He can't lose the baby. Oh! Does this mean I get to learn who the mate is soon? I can't wait for something like that. But honestly: playing Quidditch when you're preggers? Not smart! In the rain no less. I swear. If he and his baby survive this, and they better, Harry needs to ground his brother. No flying. In fact, if Harry and Lucius and Draco's lover don't ground him, I will. No more flying, period! And definitely no Quidditch! I mean, come on! ~dpa06~
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