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By : Extraho
  • From darkpyroangel06 on September 11, 2007
    Wow. What an amazing intro. I can guarantee there's no way I've read a Fenrir/Harry like this before. I want to know how they meet, how they get together, what Lucius and Bella and Rodolphus are going to say about all of this. How he's going to play Ron and Hermione, and still hang out with Draco all the time. Holidays? Oh, I have so many questions. Questions I'm sure will be answered in the coming chapters. I must get to reading. GREAT start! ~dpa06~
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  • From buttplug on September 11, 2007
    loving it can't wait for the updates
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  • From Wilder on September 11, 2007
    Oh my god! i love it! that is absolutely NOT what i expected, it is so much better! :glomp: Uke!Fenrir was HOT, who woulda thunk it? well obviously you and Harry... i can't wait to see where this goes... do i detect the subtle hint of mpreg? *squee*
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  • From lazycrazykitten on September 10, 2007
    That was hot. Oh and younger Fenrir...very yummy!!!
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  • From Bastian on September 10, 2007
    I have never read a FenrirxHarry where Harry was the dominant. Normally I like this pairing because Fenrir is so dominant, but the way you painted Fenrir to be more femalish I guess I can kind of see it but it would help to see Harry with a bit more dominating role as well. Even though this isn't my normal cup of tea I still liked it and hope you continue to update it. But if Fenrir mentioned that Harry was a packmates cub does he mean Remus? And if it is Remus if they are packmates wouldn't that make Harry not his enemy? Just a little confused there I could have just read the whole thing completely wrong. Anyway good chappy update soon!
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  • From alma on September 10, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on September 10, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From sanda on September 10, 2007
    good chapter
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  • From Nonny on September 09, 2007
    love love
    update soon
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  • From lovemeornot on September 09, 2007
    please put up the third chapter its a very good story
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  • From Panther13 on September 09, 2007
    I love it so far. Please update soon!
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  • From KatrinaCarter on September 08, 2007
    Very nice. I like how you're writing this one. It's different and I love differnet.. when it's tasteful.

    Great job with Harry being a Slytherin in Gryffindor clothing... man those Red's are really stupid ya know...

    Best of luck, and I can't wait to see what happens next... mmmm Harry getting laid by fenrir..... all hard and rough.....mmmmm

    Cheers!
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  • From bumblebee on September 07, 2007
    oooooh i like this dark harry, hehe

    Can't wait for more!! ^^
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  • From Chrysania on September 07, 2007
    OMG I love you!!!!

    In a completely platonic way, of course, my girlfriend, and my boyfriend, would kill me if I told that to someone else and really meant it....

    Anyway, I adore your story. Please write more, as then I would have more to read, and less to find.
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  • From Sere on September 06, 2007
    It isn't real. Look it up on Snopes.com. Cool though, try genochoice too, it's funny. Like the story, thanks for writing it.
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