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Reviews for Alphas

By : Extraho
  • From CAttwood on January 08, 2010
    This story is getting very interesting!! Looking forward to the order of the fried chicken and co getting their asses kicked!!
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  • From ANON - tilekitten on December 07, 2009
    awesome story please update soon. i cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - nedra19 on November 24, 2009
    Hello I love father Harry he is so viril very good fic Bye
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  • From Flame150 on November 20, 2009
    I love this story and I have to ask when you plan on updating again. I hope it is soon though.
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  • From nekosneko on October 24, 2009
    I am now going to sound like a little fan girl... OMGGGGG!!!!!!!!! ...done. I love your story. I read all 28 chapters in one day and cannot wait for more. I only have one question to ask, and I mean no offense to your beta if you have one, but do you have one? While I love your story to death, there are multiple little typos that drive me nuts-grammar nerd that I am. The bad thing is, the majority of them make serious or sexy scenes humorous. If you do not have a beta and would like one, I am willing to do it for you. I know people read over there own stuff and see nothing wrong, but that's because your mind assumes the correct thing is there even if it's not(no offense if you already knew this).

    Everything said above is meant purely constructively, I do not mean to flame in any way; if it is taken that way, I apologize.

    I look forward very much to your next update.

    nekoyoka
    nekoyoka@aim.com
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  • From yamiyugi23 on August 18, 2009
    great story! Please do ignore any one saying its rubish and update soon! 100000/10 for the story, I've never liked a DomHarry, always a SubHarry as no one could write a DomHarry in my oppion to what I was looking for but you've done it ^-^ all I have to say is great story, update soon and I hope that Harry gets the bonding rings back from Dumbles soon! I don't know how the alerts thing works on this site so please e-mail me when ever there is new chapters up! my e-mail is corsula@hotmail.com


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  • From ANON - DemonVamp on August 07, 2009
    Aw, It's stopped. I moved from your fanfiction story to this one because it was more updated now I got nothin to read please update soon...
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  • From tilekitten34 on July 21, 2009
    awesome story hope for more chapters soon
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  • From ANON - tolani on July 17, 2009
    awww pls update soon
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  • From ANON - echo on July 13, 2009
    hi this is lilybean and i love your story its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good


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  • From ANON - duzziecatz on June 09, 2009
    Ahhhhhhhhhhhh I love it. I think I totally forgot about this story until I found it again rereading this story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From Kalendral9 on May 03, 2009
    This is so twisted I don't know where you'll go next. I can't wait for more. ^_^ K
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  • From ANON - faith B on April 22, 2009
    ooohhh love it
    please continue soon
    i cant wait for some more drama............
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  • From ANON - Duzziecatz on January 26, 2009
    wow I love your story its so original and great. I can't wait for the next update good luck. =)

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  • From ANON - Dawnn on January 05, 2009
    update soon please i love Harry/Fenrir and theres not enough of it or people who finish it i truly do love this story !!!

    D
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