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  • From Slytherdor on October 08, 2008
    Yippy!!
    You're back!!!!
    And just in time for my Birthday too!!
    Been Waiting on tenter hooks for an update!

    BTW, Nicko is too cute!
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on October 08, 2008
    PleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePleasePlease
    update I want to know what happens next. Please *sniffle* T_T
    Maybe you could E-mail me when you up date if its not to much trouble.
    My E-mail is RebeccaMolinar3@hotmail.com just in case if not I check daily.
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  • From ANON - reba on October 08, 2008
    Hi, no fair shortening the new chapter by using whole paragraphs of the last one. I do like this story very much. It's different from the usual Harry the idiot. When will the next update will be up? Cookies for your muse:-))
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  • From ANON - Mia on September 29, 2008
    Hey.
    Well.
    What can I say?
    Absolutely fell in love with this story. =]
    And definitely want to be on mailing list. =]
    Love Fenrir and Harry.
    But are you going to mention who actually bit Remus?
    And how old is Fenrir actually? In this fic?
    Cheers. =]
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  • From ANON - Ivori on September 24, 2008
    luv this story! Xp hope u update soon. its really good please finish it! =D

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  • From ANON - Harryetty on September 10, 2008
    Hey love the fic although I normally go for uke!Harry but this is an original take on several plotlines.
    If you have an update mailing list can you put me on it?
    Thanx

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  • From ANON - Jo on September 04, 2008
    I kept telling myself that I would get around to reading this story later, and now I finally have. It's great and a part of me wishes that I had waited longer so I wouldn't have to wait for updates. I can't wait til Dumbles gets what's coming to him.
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  • From cherrybifem on August 28, 2008
    Awesome. I can't wait for a new chapter. I like the idea. I don't see near enough Harry/Fenir stories. It is a nice change.
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on August 16, 2008
    Please update I really, really would love to read more.
    Please update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From demonsdawn001 on August 06, 2008
    I have enjoyed this story a lot for how well it is written and its originality. I am not flaming but attempting to give you some construstive critism. At a few points during the story it appeared as if you were so sucked into the writing of the story that you kinda spaced on grammer. Truthfully that was easy to ignore but in those same spots it was a little difficult to understand. I love that you are portraying Fenrir as young and Harry's sub as I haven't seen that done before. I dunno if you would be willing but if you are could you shoot me an email when you update? I would love to read the rest! -DD
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on August 05, 2008
    Please update soon. I do love this story and hope to read more.

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  • From Jan on June 28, 2008
    Yay! Remus is still a good guy! I'm so Happy ^_^
    ARGH!!! Dumblefuck has got to fucking GO!!! They 'need' to freaking KILL him in the most gruesome of ways!!!!!!

    Please update chapter 28 soon.

    Jan

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  • From darkpyroangel06 on June 23, 2008
    Interesting. I still don't like it, but I can kinda understand it better now. I liked the healing part. Harry was angry, is still angry; they hurt his pack and they hurt his family. Harry is the leader, THE Alpha; he understands his role in the pack and helped Remus heal despite what happened, and also allowed him back intot he pack with restrictions. He is a good leader, a good Alpha Lord. Remus did wrong, and he was punished. Remus has explained himself, and is now being given certain priviledges back. Restricted, of course. I mean, he hurt his pack. I wouldn't welcome him back with open arms either. But Harry did heal him, and did allow him back. That's huge. I guess he's going to get his mate's bonding rings back, eh? I don't know whether to say 'Poor Dumbledore' or 'Dumbarse bastard...'. I'm leaning toward the second one...

    I also noticed several spelling mistakes throughout this chapter. I don't want to be mean about it, just wanted to bring it to your attention. ~dpa06~
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  • From mls1971 on June 21, 2008
    love this story!!!!! can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!! hope you update soon!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on June 21, 2008
    Ah *pout* and I was looking forward to a delicious torture scene.. *heaves frustrated sigh*
    But am hoping the fact that Dumbles stole those rings will be enough to drag him in front of the Wizengamot, after all there can't be any legal reason why the headmaster of the school needs those rings?

    Cheers!

    Please please update sooner! Almost thought you had abandoned the story:(
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