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By : Extraho
  • From bumblebee on June 21, 2008
    Too Short! I want more! More!!

    I'm so glad Remus didn't betray Harry on purpose

    Update Soon!
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  • From Kitsuko on June 20, 2008
    Post :) please?
    i really love your story and i hope that Fenrir and their kids will be fine
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  • From Ladyroo88 on June 20, 2008
    ooo! Yeah!! I can't wait for fenrir to make an entrance! Longer chappies please!!!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on June 20, 2008
    loved it. only wish there was more of it, but i'm sure you're adding as fast as you can or when the mood strikes you. good luck with the rest of the fic.
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 19, 2008
    thanks for the update, i love this chapter, i hope he will gett his revenge
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on June 19, 2008
    yeah :D I love the new chapter. I'm happy you decided to make Remus a good guy. I can't wait for the next update.
    Hope for more soon.
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  • From ANON - dani on June 18, 2008
    I would love to know what happens next and I do believe that Remus deserves his just rewards. Uusally with a Fenrir/Harry pairing people make it seem brutish and hauche but you have pulled it off wonderfully! Also since Harry is the dom I usually discontinue reading since I always saw Harry as a sub but you wrote with such mastery that it seemed only natural.

    -Dani.
    update as soon as you can ^_^
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  • From AlphazSlut on June 13, 2008
    Yellow! Sorry, didn't realize i wasn't signed in...lol. well yeah now i am... so... HURRY AND UPDATE
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  • From ANON - AlphazSlut on June 13, 2008
    Oh Fuck You Lady! I don't know how you think you are but this aint gunna work! I am totally about to kick your ass... after I finish crying! WAAAAHHHH!!!! How are you just gunna leave me hangin' like that, huh??? I wanna know whats gunna happen! Waaaahhh! Update now! No, I'm going to find you and kidnap you and make you write non-stop till the end! HAHAHA! Then You wont be able to make me cry with your stupid cliffie's! WWAAAHH!! I WANT AN UPDATE! No though, for real when I finished reading this last chap. i moved my hand done to lick Next Chapter... but it wasn't there, and for real no joke, my heart ACTUALLY skipped a beat... it was very odd.... I actually panicked for a minute... Like you know how you fall off the bed and ur heart stops for a second, but then you hit the ground and it's fine? It was like that.... except with the adrenaline rush of killing someone.... anyway, I love the FH pairing, but this is different and I'm totally doggin' it home-fry. LOL! So don't just stop updating or I'm going to hunt you down and kill you... don't laugh I'm not kidding! J/K But seriously keep it up I really like the way it's going! It's #2 on my fav's list, #1 is sweet puppy... but i guess it's never going to be updated... which make me cry... the writer is also number one on my ~OTHER~ list, but i can't tell you which one... then you might be called to court and you wouldn't be able to update my stories and that wouldn't be cool... so if the popo ask...you know NOTHING.... Now, just keep updating and make sure you only stay #2 on ONE list.... LOL.. I'm totally J/K! But seriously... I'm serious...unless ur hott and bi... then we might able to work out a um....*deal* ;P (the fact that the tongue is sticking out is definitely a pun...)
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  • From ANON - Sasha on June 08, 2008
    POST, I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - angelkitty77 on June 06, 2008
    oh man i just found you on this site. i have followed you on fanfiction and now you are here and I LOVE IT. this is so good. and DAMN you are so awesome of a writer. i hope you exams have gone well. cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Alicia on May 24, 2008
    I have read the whole thing i just forgot to review so i am putting it in now. This is a very new concept to me and i read a lot. I am enjoying it and find the need to beg and pleed for the next chapter. I got into this fic so well i started to think Yes! when a so called light member got just what they deserve. i am now going to read others that you have done. thanks me
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  • From ANON - DragonQueen on May 22, 2008
    this is so good! more please!


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  • From ANON - Solomon on May 21, 2008
    This story gave me goose bumps Great Story Please let me know when you update all your stories Slm8364@aol.com Thank You
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  • From ANON - Oriya-Chan on May 18, 2008
    I don't know if I have reviewed this fic yet...-_-;; Anyway! OMG OMG OMG!!! LUPIN! HOW COULD HE!?!?!?!?!?!? -Ahems- Great story. >> I love this fic. The 'pure blood' magic and how you are making it is...spectacular. I believe that I have only read one other story where the Pure Bloods actually have a reason for being how they are, and it was an awesome fic too. Not as good as this one, but it was good. -Grins- I love Fenrir/Harry pairings. There are so few good ones...T_T I am starting to want to kill Lupin. And what you did with Sirius is just....Wow. There are no words to describe that. -Giggles- Draco/Sirius....I think I have found a new pairing... -Giggles some more- Fenrir is kind of girly for my taste, but we haven't seen a lot of chapters where he can show off his manlyness. O_o (HINT HINT) Lol. I just want to see Fenrir kick the shit out of Remus so that Lupin can get his head out of his ass. Totally up to you though. you are the author, and I am but a lowly reader... -Sniffles- ANYWAY. I have been with this fic in what seems like FOREVER and it is progressing nicely. I cannot wait for the next chapter but I get where you are coming from with the whole...Test thing. yuch. Sirius makes a good bad guy though. -Snickers- Hermione is going to get Griifs pissed at her because she is going to lose all the house points in DADA. XD Oh god. This is great. Alrighty then. That is it for now. I eagerly await for the next installment. Buh Bai! -Bows-
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