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Reviews for Alphas

By : Extraho
  • From addyer13 on May 14, 2008
    FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!(sighs in relief) i thought that you were never going to update and that would have made me sad (wipes tear).please update again soon. (puppy dog eyes)
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on May 14, 2008
    OMG that was brill! Remus Lupin is my favourite Harry Potter character, and I love him dearly. But I can see where you are going with this, and although I don't like him being the bad guy, you are doing a wonderful job with this. So no, this isn't a flame on your writing my favourite character bad like that. I do like the way you explained Neville's magical ineptness though. That was sheer brilliance! Taking half of their magic and giving it to someone else? Wow. I NEVER would have come up with something like that. I love that Sirius is the DADA professor, and that he's actually going to teach them something useful. I love that Harry is going to exact revenge on Remus, even if he is my favourite character. I'd want revenge too, and I'd want my husband's damned consort rings back too. Sheesh! Keep it up, you're doing great.

    Oh, and, we haven't heard anything about Fenrir in a while. How's he doin'? ~dpa06~
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  • From Jan on May 13, 2008
    Uh oh! Remus is in trouble.... again! Can't wait to see what Harry does to him ^_^

    Please update chapter 27 soon.

    Jan ^_~
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  • From ANON - Priss_Kimio on May 13, 2008
    Yay, you finally updated. I will have exams soon to :(. I can not wait to see Remus reaction to his Lord :). I have a question. Why when they say "Harry was stolen by Potters" no one reacts? It is as if they dont hear it.
    Good luck with your exams.


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  • From bumblebee on May 13, 2008
    Hmm...wonder what Harry will say or do to Remus.. ahh!! i so want to read more!!

    But since you're having exams, i guess i'll just have to wait impatiently *sigh*
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on May 13, 2008
    Oh GOd!! I soooooo want to hear what Harry will say to Remus!! *whimpers* Please please please let him torture him a bit more! Humiliate him!! Pretty pretty please!!
    AS for the DADA class! Brill!! Especially that 'Mione was put down:D Looking forward to her realizing what a second-class citizen she is:D

    Cheers!
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  • From ShadeOf on May 12, 2008
    It's great story! I read, read and read, just can't stop until I read the 25 chapter.
    Thank you for your time you use to write this story.
    I wait for update with impatience.
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  • From Psychtcpyro7 on May 03, 2008
    I've been trying to sit down and read this for awhile now and so this weekend I bolted through it all in nearly one sitting. Anyway, they have one f'ed up family if nothing else. Reminds me of the Godfather. Still, love it. Picturing Fenrir as a Sub and younger was tougher then I thought it would be. Its all those violent werewolf rape fics is what it is! Psh, werewolves are people too.
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 29, 2008
    this was great!.....when r u going to put a new chapter on....cant wait to read what happends next
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  • From shelly56787 on April 29, 2008
    well, i for one am in love with this story so.... yeah... update soon i'm totally lookin' forward to more... yummyness! ^_~

    Awesome cookies!

    Rose
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  • From ANON - twice-as-evil-as-you121212 on April 26, 2008
    Hi! I've just spent about 3 hours reading Alphas and I love it. I hope you update soon. Could you possibly add me to your update list if you have one? I'm not good at giving critisisms but I can tell you how much I enjoy your work. Hope to hear from you soon.
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  • From ANON - CJ Masters on April 21, 2008
    OOOO burn. I love the last line of the story proper. Mohr please. :P Good work. Interesting premise, I don't think I have seen this particular explanation for Harry's parseltongue anywhere.
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  • From ANON - lockheart on April 18, 2008
    I love your writing, you are truly talented. This is not idle flattery I do not give compliments out unless they are well deserved. There are a few small grammar mistakes and one or two sentences are hard to understand, but all in all it is one of the better Harry/Fenrir stories. I love the plot, very original. With that I must go because i have stayed up all night reading this beautiful story. Please continue. I love mpreg and eagerly await the birth of the twins.
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on April 17, 2008
    I love this story so Please up date.
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  • From ANON - Allaye Riddle on April 14, 2008
    YAY SIRIUS! *clings to* Rita... I hate that woman, irritating bug >.
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