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By : Extraho
  • From ShinigamiClara on April 14, 2008
    Bravo ^^ i feel sad whenever i see reviews like this (ones that diss the pairings and/or the slashiness of stories) Keep an open mind people! it's the 21st Century! homosexual marriage is legal! (and if you want even more proof that it's normal: it was common in Ancient Athens and Rome! so meh! and look at Plato's Symposium - particularly Aristophanies's speech on love)
    ANYWAYS! sorry to go all historical on you :P i really don't like people who flame a story someone else worked so hard on just because they didn't like the pairing or are homophobic....

    I LOVE THE ENDING (of the chapter, if you tell me this is actually the end of the story i will send a missile to your house and blow you to smithereens :P)
    It's an evil cliffhanger though T_T and so Sirius makes an appearance (FINALLY!)! definitely looking forward to all those wonderful pranks that he has planned on unsuspecting griffindors (and of course, professor bumblebee). i love the last line where Siri introduces himself! so dramatic :D
    Although, him appearing from the rafters made me think of a certain bat of the dungeons :D

    i love how your story is turning out ^^ at first i was a little weary of it, i'm not a great fan of dom-harry (although i don't mind reading dom-harry stories, in my mind he will always be a sub :D) Your beginning few chapters needs a little work though, just a little more detail here and there... his relationship with the Dursleys seemed a little weird to me, but i guess i'm used to the dursleys being pathetic and spiteful ^^

    Keep up the good work!! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter so update soon!!

    ~Dark Illusions
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  • From ANON - Silverdragon21 on April 13, 2008
    god just loved this chapter, you are an amazing writer, keep it up
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  • From eaglelinda83 on April 13, 2008
    so short...too short...i need my harry/fenrir fix...and my draco/sirius fix...damnit i need my slash fix...please update soon...HAPPY WRITING/READING!!! :-D!!!
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  • From lostinthought on April 12, 2008
    hmm me thinks a wicked streak is a foot.. can't wait for the next update. thanks so much i love reading this fic...
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on April 12, 2008
    Hehehe, welcome to hell!! Sirius purred with glee!
    That is so wicked!!

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on April 12, 2008
    Love the update! cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From bumblebee on April 11, 2008
    someone have got to do something about Rita Skeeter, too annoying!

    oh yes! sirius black is here! i didn't think it was him as DADA teacher, well a surprise that i like, hehe

    but that was abit short though, so i hope you update really soon cuz i wanna know what sirius gonna do, revenge for draco maybe? or something fun to do with gryffindors *evil laughs*

    more pleaassee!!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on April 11, 2008
    Oh!! sirius is the dada teacher oh!! you just too hyper now!! i need to know more!!
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  • From ChaosAlchemist on April 11, 2008
    I LOVE this story. I agree people should use their common sense.
    Now for Extraho Please update soon.

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  • From darkpyroangel06 on April 11, 2008
    Ha! I didn't think about Sirius! Holy shite! I was thinking the Dark Lord in his new form, but not Sirius. That is so beyond perfect! Harry, er Logan, isn't there to protect Draco and thus he gets shoved into a wall. Damn you all! Then, who steps in but the new DADA professor and DRACO'S HUSBAND/FATHER OF HIS CHILD!!! OMG, I love it and I love this fic and I think I might love you. In a severly platonic writer/reader relationship type of way. My boyfriend's a rather jealous sort. *shrugs* Oh well.

    To the reviewer who flamed you because this is a slash story, they're an idiot. Come on! The only way to find this story is to read your other stuff (which, granted, is not all M/M but is still all clearly labeled somewhere if it is) or through the Harry/Fenrir subsection of the Harry Potter category (which is obviously M/M). So, they're stupid. And just plain dumb. It's the 21st century. We don't discriminate on gender or race or religion (for the most part) anymore; why should we discriminate on sexual orientation? So stick that in your juice box and suck it.

    I love your stuff, and will be a loyal reviewer until you stop writing or I stop reading. So please, continue your marvelous work. ~dpa06~
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  • From ANON - Rhea Bleu on April 11, 2008
    Have just been reading this story i have to say that i have fell in love with it. It has all of my quirky likes that i love to find in fanfiction and i enjoy reading it immensley. Just a request, could the chapters be slighty longer??? I love reading ff and the more the better. Either way it is a great read and i look forward to the next chapter
    xx signing out. Rhea Bleu.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on April 04, 2008
    Damn that woman! I want to bash her face in, then force her into her animagus form so I can spray her with bugspray, stomp on her, and then beat her remains with a fly swatter to be sure she's dead. *growl* She's so annoying! I thought it was funny that everyone thought Harry and Draco were married, and Draco was having Harry's baby. That was hilarious! But no, Rita Skeeter had to go and ruin it... Stupid bug lady... I want ot know who the Defence teacher will be. Lucius? The new Tom? Random Guy Q? Sorry, I tend to get a bit random when I'm hungry. I was happy that Draco and Harry seemed to accept Lucius and Tom together, despite the slightly disturbing family mix-ups with step-father/grandfather/whatever. Oi, my head hruts now. Anywho! This was amazing. Take your time in writing more, because I personally understand the lack of muses. Mine take frequent, LONG vacations. Take your time, and the writing will be that much better because of it. ~dpa06~
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  • From Ladyroo88 on April 03, 2008
    i love it!! Serectly evil sirus Preggers draco!! More PLEASE!!
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  • From Silverdragon21 on April 03, 2008
    Totally awesome story - I want some more please
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on April 03, 2008
    This I think is the first fanfic that I have actually enjoyed a Rita Skeeter expos
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