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By : Ms_Figg

From Ms_Figg on January 30, 2008
Heidi: lololol. You're joking right? :::snicker::: like any of that would EVER happen. Lucius is lucky he's not dead. Not loving the blonde one in this fic at all.
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From Heidi191976 on January 30, 2008
Excellent. I hope that Professor Granger can get Severus to remove the word on Lucius' forhead. Even though a crime was committed, he doesn't deserve to live the rest of his life with a permanent reminder of it. It should also be up to Hermione to actually press charges against him for the crime. As for Severus he should confess and have to become a servant to Lucius over the summer months as punishment for the attack. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
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From alm1067 on January 30, 2008
So many updates in such little time, I am so happy:) Thanks so much, and more PLEASE!
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From ANON - Melissa on January 30, 2008
...I'm a bit befuddled as to the meaning of her last remark... unless she was just being sarcastic.

Lucius really got his, and Severus certainly proved his worth. Gotta love the Media, eh? Upstanding philanthropist... I'm surprised he managed to wiggle out of all charges with the...

No, no I'm not. The Ministry of Magic is never portrayed as being efficient.

What was I saying? Oh yes, brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next, and I love how the house elves are keeping his 'secret'. I'd like to think it's their little way of getting him back for his mistreatment. They are fairly intelligent creatures, and they certainly understand the situation. I may be off the mark, but it makes me happy. In my mind it balances things out just a little more.

These updates are so frequent! Yay! (I
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From teenyboppersc on January 30, 2008
Severus! What a hero! I can't believe how creative he was with the writing spell on Lucius forehead. I was worried that you were going to have him kill Lucius and have the rose be a clue to Hermione that his soul was fragmented. I'm glad he remains whole though. Hermione shouldn't kill him! Severus is why she feels free for the first time in years! She should reward him winkwink*.
Fabulous story- as usual!
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Harley
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From wishywashy on January 30, 2008
hermione is soo mean in this fic. i love that. and the house elves keeping their masters' secrets even from himself made me laugh outloud. i loved it. admittedly i skipped through a lot of the description of hermiones rape. that was brutal. i'm happy to read new chapters. will severus renew his pursuit of hermione before he finishes his potions?
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From ANON - anonymous on January 30, 2008
OMG HOW DO YOU JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?!?!?!?! OH MY GODDDSS!!! I swear this is crack. Pure crack.

Keep up the great work!!!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
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From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 30, 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From Utopia on January 30, 2008
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Well, Snape certainly had some guts to do that! I'm impressed, and her reaction was BRILLIANT, but afterwards was so calm and resigned... I can't wait for the next bit!

10/10
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From Utopia on January 30, 2008
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Ooooh! not doing an essay! The others must think he's lost his marbles!! Though I suspect he's done it anyway, and its probably an O.

10/10
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From Utopia on January 30, 2008
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I have to admit skimming this chapter, the nightmare certainly lived up to its title and did alarm me quite a bit; poof of quality.
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From Utopia on January 30, 2008
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From Utopia on January 30, 2008
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Oh Wow! I was a little dubious about this at first... but my Gryffindor bravery won and I clicked the link, and I'm pleasantly surprised!

I love how all the roles are reversed, Lilly exchanged for James; Lilly and the female marauders; Snape being the brains of the operation. I wonder, is Lucius more of a Lucida? and Narcissa a Narcissus? Or is it only a Hermione-Snape swap?

I think every student has a crush on at least one teacher at some point in their academic career - though Snape may have bitten off more than he can chew with his!

10/10
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From ANON - Melissa on January 30, 2008
He's got him! He's got him! He's obviously not going to kill him, or he would have done that already, unless he plans play with him first. Torture is in store for the blonde haired devil, either way, though what kind? I'm terribly anxious to know, I'm sure you'll make it very memorable. And satisfying.

Hopefully the resolution of this will turn him back into his old self. As much as I love the older, snarkier Snape, I'm also fond of the bright, young Severus you've created. He may be a bit more mature, seeing as this was a very harsh push into the injustice of reality, but still.

You update so frequently, I love you for that. Great chapter, can't wait for the next.
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From Heidi191976 on January 30, 2008
Another great chapter. I hope that Severus is very careful in trying to go after Lucius Malfoy. He should just leave it and let Professor Granger take care of it. I look forward to reading more soon.
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