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Reviews for In an Alternate Universe

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Melissa on January 30, 2008
    *lets out a fangirl squeel*

    You updated! Yay! I really love this story, everything about it, what more can I say other than I can't wait to read more?

    Albus's treatmeant of Hermione is a little, saddening. I can see where he's coming from, but it's still a bit depressing to know the one person who's supposed to care the most, and look out for her... has given up.

    Well, perhaps not given up exactly, but Severus's passion for her well being is something Hermione's been sorely lacking. I wonder if he'll work up the courage to ask her about her past with Lucius? He probably won't think it's any of his business, but you've always written him as a bit of a volatile personality.

    Now he's a Gryffindor, that can only exasborate the situation... I'm sure something will slip out. How would he react when he finds out Lucius's has done this before? Has rituralisticall raped Hermione, while she was at Hogwarts, and nothing was ever done.

    I can't wait to see what he does! An avenging angel. A hot, dark, passionate, 18 year old avenging angel. Can it get much better than that? I've always had a rather delicate sense of justice. I personally have a bit of a mean streak when I feel I've been wronged... that's why this is all so pefect. I'm happy to have my scale-balancing phantom in this plot. Go Severus!

    lol, "what more can I say" indeed. I'm done!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 30, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From SorceressFujin on January 30, 2008
    Great chapter! I wish they were longer, I LOVE this story. ^___^
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  • From on January 29, 2008
    My goodness. *shudders* Brilliant story. Painful...you could feel Severus' remorse leap off the screen. Thank you for the update!
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  • From ANON - mightypooka on January 29, 2008
    *sigh* You've done it again. I'm hooked lol. Keep up the great work! I have read every other story you have posted on this site, and by doing that, I've left myself without something to read now lol.

    Can't wait to see more Ms_Figg yumminess!!!
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  • From bluedecor on January 29, 2008
    Thanks for the update :)
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 29, 2008
    Poor hermione! But the end gave me a chuckle, that's for sure! Love this story.
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 29, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I am glad that Severus released Professor Granger from their oath. I think that in time she might just fall for him, especially knowing how much he is helping her. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From myangeldraco on January 29, 2008
    Oh wow!, it feels like my birthday. Three new chapters!!!! I could jump up and down with glee. I really hope you continue, just look at how many reviews you've got!!!!!

    Excellent chapters, as always. I hate Lucius what a cruel and sinister bastard!!!!!

    Hope you can add more to this fic soon, I know I know lets give you a break, I mean you have loads going on, but I bet ppl are loving your many contributions to this site, I know I am and I'm mainly an avid DM/HG reader!!!!!
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 29, 2008
    Another excellent chapter! (as always) poor Hermione, having to deal with a crying Severus. lol!
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  • From Jullsy on January 29, 2008
    I see that you are beck in force. You finished Twice bitten and you have already 3 chapters full of emotions in this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From on January 29, 2008
    Oh my goodness. Lucius...ugh. I hope Sev and/or Hermione get him good.

    Thanks for the updates!
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  • From IncaShine on January 29, 2008
    I'm glad to see this updated. It's my favorite out of the stories that you have posted most recently.
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  • From SarahTimontry on January 29, 2008
    I'm still loving this story! Please keep writing it.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on January 28, 2008
    Oh damnit... it did happen... you gave no mercy to our cranky Potion's Mistress, it seems. But then, Snape wouldn't have been spared torture were he in the same position. Something about rape... squicks me, I suppose, and I'm hard to squick. The fact that Hermione is so strong about it heartens me, however, and makes me like this version even more. If she doesn't let it really bother her, as so many defeated women before her, than it doesn't seem so bad from my end of it. I suppose she's gone through it all before, so she's used to coping. Plus, she'll get Lucius back, or Severus will. The point being that Malfoy will get his, so I'm happy.

    Lovely, quick update, Miss Figg. Looking forward to the next.
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