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Reviews for Fighting For My Love And Right

By : imera
  • From lissagal99 on September 22, 2007
    Why... stop blacking out HARRY! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON!
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  • From RRW on September 22, 2007
    This story is absolutely fascinating. Great chapter.
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  • From alma on September 15, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From RRW on September 15, 2007
    Fascinating. What an interesting plot. I can't wait to see how Draco fits into this.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 15, 2007
    But he's 2 months pregnant so it can't be from the rape! I sooo need chapter 4!
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  • From dracoharry4life on September 11, 2007
    So, he was raped? Drugged or obliviated.
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  • From anniea on September 11, 2007
    oh poor harry knocked up and has no clue how it happened. update soon this sounds interesting *kisses*
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 10, 2007
    Who has been "calling" him? Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From alma on September 06, 2007
    good start!
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  • From Jan on September 06, 2007
    Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From NightLo on September 06, 2007
    Well, I am confused also, please...update soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 06, 2007
    more please!!
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  • From DracoHarry on September 06, 2007
    Loved this, but I am kind of confused. I wish I could figure out what happened and why Harry doesn't remember a party. I know you will clear all that up soon enough. Keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 05, 2007
    Interesting. Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From GGreen on September 05, 2007
    ch 1: Interesting idea, but it is a little choppy - the sections or scenes don't really seem complete before moving on to the next.

    This might be in part due to the mechanics. The one that jarred the most was during Harry's conversation with Dumbledore. D said, "... many has left home". This might work better as, "... many have left for home...". Sometimes, using spell check and reading the screen, its too easy to get lost in the words. I find reading the text out loud really helps catch missing words, correctly spelled words that are wrong for the context, etc.

    Good luck.


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