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Reviews for Hidden Friends

By : Darkwolf01
  • From LadydAllusion on February 23, 2008
    I absolutely love this story! I can't wait for you to update! Please do so soon.
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  • From Fyre on February 12, 2008
    Oh... wow... i am rather enjoying your piece here... the depth of Gabriel is a very compelling one and she makes me want to find out more about her... not only that but i really like the story arc... though i would kill the minister before i was forced into marrage... well if ss was there maybe... still i would go insane speaking of insane i would have caused great pain to the ex --.-- lol anywhooooo thanks for writing :DD
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  • From sslover on November 26, 2007
    i have just read your story. and i think its brilliant so far and i really cant wait for more xxx i love it xxxxxxxxxxx please post more soon xxxxxxxx
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  • From LadyKind on November 16, 2007
    alright damn it update!!!! I need more that is soooo cruel just to drift off...like......that
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  • From ApollinaV on November 11, 2007
    Michael makes an interesting villian. Quite a foil to Severus. They seem to be polar opposites, and yet Sev is the 'good' guy. Novel concept for him.

    Hm... the backstory about her youth is creative. I wonder if the reference to a tattoo on her wrist is an illusion to a dark mark. Timeframe wise it wouldn't be unfathomable. Huh? Nothing is straightforward in this fic. I like it.

    Oooh goodie Sev picked up her scent, can't wait for the moment of truth when he makes the connection and doesn't deny it. Can we say, Antici......pation?

    Good stuff.
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  • From xamphira on October 15, 2007
    Don't put "not great title" and "better than it sounds" in the summary. Sell your story a little bit - you like it enough to publish it here, so have some confidence in your work. Because putting it down like that puts people off. :-)
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  • From vampkestrel on October 15, 2007
    interesting story so far can't wait to read more
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  • From ApollinaV on October 10, 2007
    Hmmm... Some answers, but more questions than answers. I like it.
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  • From ApollinaV on September 05, 2007
    Wolfsoul, this is a great start. I like the character development. I know you'll probably torture us abit before the reveal, but it's bound to be good. (Love a little angst)

    Hidden Friends doesn't suck as a title, have a bit of confidence.
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