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By : SickPuppy
  • From anniea on October 08, 2007
    aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh, well with the hope of the sequel this ending isn't as bad. *kisses*
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  • From campchamp21 on October 07, 2007
    so did the baby die?
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  • From Jilliane on October 07, 2007
    .....the quote at the end......it was brutal.....but fitting. I think this, in terms of writing, is a good ending, and I think it's very brave of you to end it this way knowing that all your fans will be devastated. I certainly am, but still, I applaud you for sticking to the story YOU wanted to write rather than going with what would obviously have been the fan favourite. Your writing is wonderful, the fact that you make your readers laugh and cry and really feel for your characters and what they experience is the mark of a true writer. I loved everything about this story, and although I complained about the cliffhangers, I liked them too, they were well-placed and conducive to the suspense of the story line, which is how they should be used, rather than as a cheap shot by the author, which is how they are, unfortunately, used by far too many writers. You can rest assured, dear SickPuppy, you have served your fans well and that we are all waiting on pins and needles for the sequel and more of your wonderful writing. Congratulations and, Domo, arigato gozaimasu, Sensei, on another brilliantly written story that was an absolute joy to read. 10/10 A+
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  • From Jilliane on October 07, 2007
    *sobbing*.......I'm gutted........


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  • From hotmamma82 on October 07, 2007
    so not fair! I wanted a happy ending now i am near tears. poor baby sapphire. will there be a sequel? please *puppy eyes*
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  • From Jilliane on October 07, 2007
    Well, I hope you aren't tired of hearing congratulations yet, 'cause it doesn't look like anyone is tired of giving them! And deservedly so! Two great chapters; sweet and yummy smut, and a nice Ron and Hermione interlude, with Ron for once not taking no for an answer from Hermione! I'm glad you wrote this like this, Ron being a grown up, I get a little tired of him always being a git in stories. The only thing I find fault with, Oh Cruel One, is the freakin' cliffhanger!! Grrrrrrr! Update! Immediately!! :D
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  • From CanidCrafter on October 07, 2007
    I like where this thread is going^_^.
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  • From anniea on October 06, 2007
    wait what's going on? ron's being a man?! it's a miracle. though i'm a little sad that it's drawing to an end. please update soon *kisses*
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  • From hotmamma82 on October 06, 2007
    OMG you have got to be kidding me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate cliffies!!!!!!!!!*throws heavy things at a certain writers head* sorry I learned how to throw a temper tantrum from my 3 year old she would be proud. Please oh please update soon!
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  • From Jilliane on October 06, 2007
    Once again, congrats on brilliantly meeting your personal challenge! I liked this chapter as well as all the others, but I don't think you rely too heavily on dialogue. I think the story is great just the way you've been writing it, I think you've maintained a nice balance between dialogue and action and I, for one, don't think you need to change anything around, just keep writing as you've been. Obviously from the number of hits (over 20,000!) and favourable reviews, you're doing something very right!!



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  • From hotmamma82 on October 05, 2007
    Congratulations on yet another awesome chapter and for managing to make a chapter without any speech work so well! I commend you on that. The only time I go without speech is during sex scenes it just gets in the way for me. Too much talking not enough loving I say.
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  • From anniea on October 04, 2007
    ick but good update soon *kisses*
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  • From hotmamma82 on October 04, 2007
    I just found this story today and I must say that in cases such as this where the story is so long and I am reading it all to catch up I find myself skimming and reading the smut and some other key points and moving on checking for the end. With this story I actually eagerly read every word of it and was shocked to find myself at the end of today's update and quite disappointed as well. I really like this story usually snarry is not one of my favorites, but this one definitely goes on my list of daily checks! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Jilliane on October 04, 2007
    Poor Severus! Angst be thy middle name!
    Another well written chapter, and congrats on meeting your personal challenge.

    As for the previous chapter, please DON'T rewrite it! Yes, it was ickysquicky, but it was perfectly written. You included just enough surprise and ewwwww! factor to give your story the right twist, and to show how Severus's hands are tied in regard to Voldemort's wishes, yet also express Severus's loathing for the things he must do to protect Harry and himself. I really think you did an excellent job of conveying that. Throughout you wrote that Severus was stoic and expressionless on the outside, but his inside revulsion was perfectly clear. The "...got down to work.." line said it all. There was no enjoyment for Severus, nor any choice, in what he was being forced to do.
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  • From Jan on October 04, 2007
    Please update soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Harry and Severus bonding. ^_^
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