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By : SickPuppy
  • From BlackCrow on October 12, 2017

    Oh flipping hell! That was a sad ending, I was blubbing! I thought using the quotes was very clever, and I like the little bits at the end where you're chatting with Severus and Harry, and I think their terms of endearment for each other are really sweet. Oh, and Draco's secret was interesting. Bsd Lucius! 

    But, you're really good at coming up with interesting stories to weave the smut into, bravo! 


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  • From Annecia89 on February 07, 2015
    This was great! Now on to the sequel!!
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  • From ANON - Logan on October 28, 2011
    Here I was, enjoying the story, and chapter 23 starts copying the damn book. Crap. I hate the book.
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  • From ANON - Ari on March 11, 2010
    I loved every part of this story but the end. Poor Sapphire! :'(

    Sorry my review isn't more detailed but I read this on my phone days ago but couldn't review from there. Now I'm on a laptop, I kinda can't remember much cuz I read part two and it was good but a little disappointing. This one was much more original and brilliant. Still I highly recommend them both! 5+ to this one and 4+ to TNIB! :D
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  • From sweetciel on August 14, 2008
    Wow. That was a depressive ending. So sad. To think that they have 28 hours to consumate their bond otherwise it would fail. Sad situation indeed.
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  • From cravedom on April 14, 2008
    I do not know if you are still reading reviews for this story but it seem appropriate to write anyways. The ending was perfect. Sure it was not happy but it was the only reasonable one and it was brave of you to stick with it. I am gleefully going to start on that second part and while happy endings are not necessary it is my hope that poor Sev
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  • From ANON - kibi11 on February 10, 2008
    So many chapters, and still, I managed to read them all in one day. I've never got bored, with every passing chapter, I've became more interested. You wrote really amazing story, you should be proud of yourself, because there's not many fanfics like this...interesting, thrilling, heartbreaking, full of love...
    I really enjoyed reading this story of yours, I like happy-endings, so I hope that sequel will end...happily.
    Keep it up, see you soon.
    Kibi11
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  • From Rosei on December 01, 2007
    Very much enjoyed your story!
    Thanks for beginning a sequel!
    Loved the developing love story>

    Thanks,
    R
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  • From AryanDark on November 29, 2007
    OH GOD.
    I HATE YOU.
    *Collapses*

    I'M SO SAD NOW.
    Ah huh huh hurr...*Sobs*

    Fan-freakin'-tastic writing, a great plot (the only mpreg fanfiction I've ever read and bothered to continue with--usually the way the man is impregnated is ridiculous, but you made it seem almost normal), and a flawless ending.
    It was a perfect ending, with a realistic idea behind it, and I respect that.

    ...BUT I'M STILL MILDLY DEPRESSED, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.
    I'll have to go and re-read the smut chapters to cheer myself up. *Shifty eyes*

    I read all this in under two hours, I was that enthralled, and by GOD I enjoyed it.
    Thank you very, very, very much for posting this. A few errors, but don't we all make them? Some were typos anyway (damn them to Hell...).

    And, tomorrow, and many nights after that, I shall be sure to go and fangasm over your other fics.
    Thank you again!

    And goodnight!
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  • From alma on October 10, 2007
    good story!!!
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  • From Jilliane on October 10, 2007
    *snickers* "I own and operate a ferocious ego."--Bill Moyers

    SickPuppy, have you ever heard the phrase "Great minds think alike"? That quote by Moyers is one of my favourites!!

    I'm glad that, as with "Tasks" you took the time to add author's notes. And oh....the sequel!!!!! I, and apparently everybody else, cannot wait!! I hope, Dear SickPuppy, that you are moving on from mourning what is done, and that the thought of what is yet to come brightens your day.

    Hugs to you for a job well done!!
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  • From anniea on October 09, 2007
    alright alright alright you've pulled me in for the sequel. *kisses*
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  • From Extraho on October 09, 2007
    oh no!!!! im glad you're writing a sequel because i would not fogive you if you didnt. im waiting patiently......
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  • From gweasley on October 09, 2007
    I have to say that I loved this story up untill now. How did Dumbledor expect the bonding to work if he seperated the two of them just after it was compleate! I could see it working if Harry knew the plan but now he must be broken hearted thinking that Sev didn't want Harry or the baby. You have left me wanting to cry and I'm not sure that I could read the second story, espicaly where Harry now feels betrayed and one rarly gets over that feeling easly. I wory that sanpe is now compleatly out of the picture and the daughter that he was looking foward to he will never get to see, and Harry will be all alone.
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  • From Escritora80 on October 08, 2007
    *huggles depressed SP* Wow. That was ... reading that last quote gave me so many chills!!! Very moving and sad. How horrible for Harry to have to go through that.

    Now bring on the sequel!! I need some closure!
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