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Reviews for Play Girl's Star

By : KraeHi
  • From thrnbrooke on February 21, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 4!!!
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  • From Leentjef on February 21, 2008
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From alleycat88 on February 20, 2008
    more please!
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  • From MightyGryffindor on February 20, 2008
    This looks to be a promising story. However, it needs cleaned up a bit. Several paragraphs have broken english or mis-spelled words. A Beta would be a help to have. If you want this DH compliant, you need Kingsley as the minister as Rufus Scrimgeour died in DH and Kingsley was made minister after the final battle. By reading it, it sounds like you were trying to describe the final battle in DH? Also, Harry left for the tower with his friends before anything was done to any of the remaining death eaters in the great hall as I read it in DH.

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    MightyGryffindor
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 05, 2007
    Fantastic chapter! Sooo need chapter 4!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 09, 2007
    Interesting beginning! Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 07, 2007
    awe poor ddraco, its a gooood story!
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  • From Natwestgirl on September 06, 2007
    I really like the story and please update soon.
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