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Reviews for If You Give A Boy A Kiss

By : JBlake
  • From DracoHarry on October 10, 2007
    That was good. I hope you do another chapter with this. You just left us with a little cliffy. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.

    Kat
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 08, 2007
    I sooo soooo soooooo wish you'd continue this!
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  • From anniea on September 25, 2007
    wow you need to change this to a long-shot instead of a one shot, that was too good to be true. *kisses*
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  • From JBlake on September 21, 2007
    Just wanted to say thank you for your reviews, I'm glad that people enjoy this so much because it was fun to type. Sorry for the typos, it was un-beta-ed and when I read it over myself it all looked okay... as it tends to do. But I did catch some mistakes when I read it here. Anyway yeah, Miss Nikki you got the If Give A Mouse A Cookie thing right, it's what I thought of when the title came to me.

    Also I'm not so sure if I will continue with this particular one but I will write more H/D because they are my favorite pairing. So thanks again for the reviews and those who are about to review (because I know you want to).
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  • From MisstressNicole on September 18, 2007
    I read this because when I read the title, it reminded me of that book that I read as a child. If You Give a Mouse a Cookie. You are probably asking yourself, now how in the world did she connect the two. I didn't but I was hopeing that it was something along those lines, that if you gave him a kiss he'd want a lot more. And my prayers were answered. If you want to write another that's a spin off of this or one that is in no way related, I'd be willing to read it. I'm going to be honest, it took me three days to read this. I enjoyed all three days, your writing kept me captivated but I still had things to do. Which is why it took me so long. There are a few mistakes, mainly typos so I wouldn't worry about it. I want to make this a long review for a long story but I'm on my way out the door. I'll review when I have more time.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

    PS The review will have to do with the actual story.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 10, 2007
    Oh please please please continue!!!!
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  • From missleymisskai on September 09, 2007
    Wow. I cant exxpress the feelings have for this story. Great job! >w
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  • From RistvakBaen on September 09, 2007
    Wow! Now that was brilliant. I love fanfictions where Draco and Harry are actors and you wrote this beautifully. Not to mention that scene at the end...that was hot. I hope you continue this
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  • From Annie on September 08, 2007
    Oh Merlin did I love reading this. Fabulous job! :]
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  • From ThineHobbit on September 08, 2007
    Wow, as other have said before ... That was hot!

    I like how you had Harry speaking french though I would hve liked to see Harry speaking more french to Draco!

    I also noticed a few mistakes that I think would be good if you sorted them out because it kind of detracts from the story if you're trying to figure out what was meant from the typo.

    The story was still aweome though!
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  • From dracoharry4life on September 08, 2007
    Wow! Just wow!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 08, 2007
    wow that was hott!
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  • From Bastian on September 08, 2007
    Wow that was pretty hot. I liked this it would be interesting to see another part since you said this was a oneshot.

    Good job.
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