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Reviews for The Pureblood Coup

By : PensievePerson
  • From ANON - johnlittlewood on December 12, 2009
    Reading the pureblood coup... Reading the pureblood coup... On chapter 27, it's quite late but i want to keep on reading for an hour or two yet.
    I'm really enjoying it!
    I am going to be very honest and tell you that i found the near rape of Ginny very exciting. I'm glad it was stopped but the near miss excited me a lot.
    I can't wait to read about what Voldermort does with Narcissa later! I hope Bella is involved somehow even though she will be jealous of the attention given by her master to her sister.

    I've read erotic fiction before but i am finding this more exciting, the reason is because i've seen your video and what a pretty young girl the author is! That makes your stories SO much more exciting!

    I'll give a review on the site as well but i won't say how much i am enjoying the twisted sex, i'll keep that between you and me
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  • From ANON - johnlittlewood on December 12, 2009
    I'm trying to have a read through today but not getting much time or privacy. It will be easier when I'm away from home over the next few days. As I said in a much earlier mail, I'm married and my wife knows nothing about my interest in things like this. The bizzar sex i mean. She knows i'm a HP fan.

    I found it very exciting to read about Ginny in a sexual way also in one of your other stories. So young and inoccent and i am found it very exciting reading about Riddle exploring her sexuality. I'm going to see if you have more about her afterwards.

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  • From ANON - johnlittlewood on December 12, 2009
    I've been reading some of that story while at work.
    I'll have to try and get some time alone at home to read it instead because sitting in the office with a hard-on is not a good look!
    I am really liking the character of Bella..... who knew i'd be turned on by a sadistic witch?

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  • From PensievePerson on December 12, 2009
    Everybody is entitled to there opinion, I can understand why you don't like it. I am planning on re-writing, basically the whole story one do. I find the writing is awful, but I think the plot is brilliant. The story itself is great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2009
    I actually think this was the worst story ever. the only reason i finished is is because i had to.
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  • From PensievePerson on December 01, 2009
    Oh and I hope somebody else, who discovers this story and likes it....can come and review! It might be a little egotistical, but I can't help wishing in the future that this could be a movie....Maybe in a hundred years when the fandom changes and Jo doesn't have full rights anymore? Who know, but I'll be dead by then! Ha ha.
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  • From PensievePerson on December 01, 2009
    Just added a new scene with Minister Scrimgeour in "Brain Damage 4" at the beginning....2,000 new words! I am going to try to come back soon and add some more scenes. I have at least 12 scenes in my head that I will be adding!
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  • From PensievePerson on October 29, 2009
    Thanks Johnlittlewood! I hope you read more than just the sexual parts not all of this is supposed to be sexual. There is a lot of the magic and politics in it....
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  • From ANON - John Littlewood on October 29, 2009
    I have been reading this while at work, i have had to stop because i can't stand up now! It's gotten pretty warm in here but i can't even stand up to open the window! I'll have to try reading more of it later when i am alone in the office.
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  • From PensievePerson on September 16, 2008
    To Slytherin_Mistess:

    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I have worked extremely hard on this. In fact, I am still adding dozens of scenes. It just so happens that I came on here just now to add another new scene. The newest scene is located in
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  • From on September 15, 2008
    amazing. i made it my goal to finish the story today and i did it! *pats self on back*
    this was the most twisted/erotic/sexual/horrific thing i have ever read...but with the greatest air of brilliance!! voldemort seemed way in chracter as he dominated Narcissa. I snickered honestly when she had to sit on lucius's face...it was funny...although i expected him [lucius] to spank her in that chapter...same goes w/ voldemort/bella i was for sure.
    laughed my arse off about the whole 'snape caning draco' thing...brat deserved it if you ask me!
    LOVED IT
    ~slytherin_mistress
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  • From screamguy on July 13, 2008
    Yeah you're right I am pretty ambivalent about those things.... *chuckles guiltily* Sometimes I find myself laughing at such nasty things, at other times recoiling in horror.What is wrong with me lol . . . That wasn't necessarily phrased as a question.... XD

    I'm not putting out any new fics for a while, as I'm going to be be working on my OC fic until it's finished. I have alot of planning for it, and many chapters or parts thereof I have prewritten. I'm doing a bit of revising myself, as I didn't really build my OC very well and I did write Dumbledore OOC so I had to tweak things quite a bit . . . But I'm not holding back so it's going to get ugly . . . to say the least.

    'New Moon of Darkness' you know, I really do not recall this chapter....this actually caught me by surprise since I found myself loving that excerpt of a poem you instilled by Sylvia Plath.
    I wish you would continue this story, as I felt a bit excited when I saw it back up in the 'General' forum and thought perhaps you were going to continue it.... Unfortunately I was mistaken it would seem. Oh well .

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  • From PensievePerson on July 12, 2008
    Thanks for all your reviews. I am glad you read it all.

    I actually did use a Latin translator online. There were so many different verb forms and alternatives with each word. I put in each word one at a time because when I translated a whole phrase back (Latin to English) it usually said the wrong thing. So I went word by word. I am sure it
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  • From screamguy on July 09, 2008
    That was the best chapter of the entire fic as far as I'm concerned. I really liked how you twisted everything up to a great close, and how Bellatrix realized she would never get the true intimacy she desired with him. really stange about how your ending was the complete antonym to the HP ending. I didn't really feel any sympathy for the malfoy couple at the end, Narcissa is something of an enabeler and Lucius well... he's a prat. But for some reason I did feel slightly bad in a way for Voldemort, when you wrote it was always him alone. The only reason I felt sorry for him was because he will never know the value of friendship or anything that is more substantial and wonderful than power. I guess only in my demented mind do I see him as a sort of ironically tragic character, ironic since he is meant to be the antagonist yet I can find him tradgic. But thats only when you put aside every act of vile cruelty he has ever committed and just see him as someone who is oblivious to things of the heart that he cannot, will never, comprehend. It's funny, for all his power and intelligence, as supposedly he is supposed to be a genius, he is emotionally retarded. In that regard, I consider him to be an imbecile, for if you posess intelligence what good is it if you have no one to share it with? What good is power when you have no friends? what is the use if you must always be completely and utterly alone?
    Great fic, sad ending.
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  • From screamguy on July 09, 2008
    Ooh, that has got to smart. >.~
    Lucius's reacton doesn't really surprise me that much, he is rather immature at times. If he never figures out that Voldemort made him sterile (( not in your fic but in speculative theory - hypothetically )) then he is an absolute moron... Hmm.. angry sex is rather amusing... ah but for poor little Narcissa? Not so much.
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