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Reviews for The Pureblood Coup

By : PensievePerson
  • From screamguy on May 23, 2008
    ((truimph of the Dark Lord3))
    That's disgusting. Unsanitary too, Scrimgeour's body hanging around where they're going to be eating, but I suppose hygiene isn't really one of their main priorities >D lol . . but still . . . downright nasty isn't it?
    I'm slightly horrified at the thought of what they're probably going to do with the body o-o XD. . LOL.

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  • From screamguy on May 23, 2008
    Umbridge is such a terrible woman, eck. >< but you know, every time I read a description of what she's wearing I can't help but laugh ^^. really hope she's not going to be involved with anything sexual later on, THOSE sorts of images are bound to drive one to madness, or at least to the toilet if you get my meaning (( as in vomiting profusely))O-o .

    Lol, suprising that selwyn did not tell voldemort about his aunt, considering that were Voldemort to learn of his failure, the reciprocation would be immensly unpleasnt. voldemort is no fool after all, his more than exceptional mind would connect the dots in no time at all I'd assume... *scratches chin thoughtfully* wonder if Selwyn gets punished later on.... If not, colour me sllightly disappointed, since he really deserves it just for being negligent and all...
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  • From screamguy on May 23, 2008
    ((Ch.22)) Well, that's certainly a quick way to becoming dismembered . . . Lucius wanting to clap voldemort on the back I mean. Strange that Lucius would feel happy for Voldemort, since he's always striked me as being the more two faced sort and the only reason he hangs about is his fear of Voldemort outweighs any other fear. really liked the line where voldemort said acidly, "I do not require protection." Brilliant snapshot of his ego and persona.

    Congrats on your story and all, that's really great^^!
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  • From screamguy on May 23, 2008
    Well, my motivation was eluding me for awhile. This isn't a review, merely a response. lol - now I need to figure out where I left off since you wrote so much while I was away ^^
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  • From Kaitlyn on May 19, 2008
    it's not finished yet, right??
    i love this story.
    it has been spot on with characterization and plot development.
    and the smut didn't hurt my opinion at all.
    :)
    simply amazing.
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  • From sheherazade on May 15, 2008
    Great ending - I really like the last line. Bellatrix is too mad even for Voldemort - that seems appropriate somehow!

    Excellent story, PP - characters and situations were kept consistent to the end and you have a fantastic flair for detail and for creating an atmosphere (usually of doom, lol). I wonder if anyone actually enjoyed the party!?
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  • From PensievePerson on May 15, 2008
    Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like it Lilith. If you really need more of this fic, I could tell you when I add more to each chapter. I am adding several more scenes, extending scenes and fixing the content and grammar, and overall writing of every single chapter. But that last update is definitely where "The Midsummer Coup" ends.

    I have other stories on here, you know and most of them star Voldemort, and he is evil in all of them.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 15, 2008
    Awesome fic! Bella is such a freak...I hope there will be more? Oh please please! I really love this fic!
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  • From sheherazade on May 13, 2008
    Oh wow, what a coincidence (about the flooding). OK, I'm just a bleeding heart, I guess, but I feel sorry for Draco in this chapter. His head must be all over the place! Bellatrix is so bizarre she makes me laugh - will she ever get her night with the Dark Lord, I wonder?
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  • From alleycat88 on May 13, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I shall miss this story terribly hun! It has been delighful and so well written!
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  • From sheherazade on April 30, 2008
    That was an intense scene - it must take a lot out of you, actually, to write such consistent high drama, so I'm not surprised you're a bit drained. I feel sorry for both Lucius and Narcissa in this, yet at the same time they can be their own worst enemies.
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  • From alleycat88 on April 09, 2008
    Poor Narcissa....man they just cannot get a break can they? Please update soon!
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  • From sheherazade on April 09, 2008
    I can understand that Lucius feels completely emasculated and driven over the edge by the events of the past few weeks, but all the same, poor Narcissa! She'll be lucky to come out of this with her sanity intact. I bet she's pretty furious with Lucius for one reason or another as well - I imagine their fight will be pretty bitter, though canon reveals that eventually their suffering brings them closer together.
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  • From sheherazade on April 07, 2008
    That's about as extreme as I've ever read - the snake thing was really creative, though it was pretty gross with its excreting the remains of Rufus Scrimgeour. The fire around the bed was very dramatic too. Also, yes, it makes sense that Voldemort would want to sterilise his potential rivals. I think Narcissa's unconsciousness was a blessed relief - this is going to traumatise her and Lucius for life, I should think.
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  • From alleycat88 on April 07, 2008
    That was just extremely disturbing...Voldemort is a sick bastard. Thanks for updating though.
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