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Reviews for The Pureblood Coup

By : PensievePerson
  • From sheherazade on January 20, 2008
    Oh wow, it didn't occur to me that Voldemort would disapprove of the orgy - I love that angle! I think it's much more ic than if he joined in himself. And I like the inner conflict Draco is having (even if he does want to get with Pansy).

    Very decadent, Roman-style orgy with extra magic - those Death Eaters don't hold back, do they?
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  • From alleycat88 on January 20, 2008
    Odd Odd Odd Odd! If even voldemort thought it disgusting then WTF?! Poor Draco forced to be on a side in which he holds no respect or allegiance for. Voldemort should have crucioed them all! For being disgusting worthless servants! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Excellent chapter by the way! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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  • From Kaitlyn on January 20, 2008
    OOOHHHHH!
    Voldy saw Bella in her element...
    *squeels*
    for some reason during this entire chapter i was singing Sex and Candy by Marcy's Playground in my head.
    hahaha
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  • From sheherazade on January 19, 2008
    Voldemort's plans to ensure racial purity of wizards and witches are truly evil - a lot of thought must have gone into them; as ever I applaud your attention to detail. Good conversation between Voldemort and Ollivander; I felt a bit sick on Ollivander's behalf at having to drink stagnant water. I can imagine properly now what the wizarding world would have been like under Voldemort - this gives me ideas for my own fic, so thank you!

    Bring on the sexual craziness!
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  • From Kaitlyn on January 18, 2008
    oooh, i hope you update soon!
    sexual craziness; there is no better kind. =)
    i like the "snapshot" story thing.
    and i really like that there might be B/V at the end.
    The Ollivander and Voldy interaction was great and super IC.
    *applauds*
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  • From alleycat88 on January 18, 2008
    voldemort's an evil bastard! Poor Ollivander....can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From sheherazade on January 15, 2008
    Ah, Snape with a cane. That always makes me very happy. And Draco bloody well deserved it; what a mean little brat he is!

    This was really nicely told and paced; you could really feel that you were there, and feel the children's fear and hysteria.

    Lovely work; please don't give up!
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  • From Kaitlyn on January 14, 2008
    You never know though, that party could have been going on. The story is so Death Eater centric that i almost forgot Harry and all of them might show up in the future.
    ...

    Draco is a lucky bastard. I want to be caned by Severus. *sigh* haha.

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  • From alleycat88 on January 14, 2008
    Caning is always good! :)
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  • From Kaitlyn on January 01, 2008
    This is a fantastically written story.
    so much drama, and angst that i think im gopnna roll over and die from happiness.
    i just wish that Voldemort had fucked Bella...i love the pairing, but i cant find any good hardcore fics about them. Hopefully in the future Voldemort takes Bella up on her offer... and uses Snape's collar idea.
    *wink wink*
    anyways I hope you update very soon.
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  • From sheherazade on January 01, 2008
    Great party! Drinks floating through the air sounds fun, and the enchanted radio waves were a great idea.

    Hmm, I wonder what Draco's got up his sleeve for more entertainment - and I wonder why Lucius is auctioning his treasures?

    Happy New Year!
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  • From sheherazade on December 30, 2007
    You didn't need to worry about this chapter being boring - I found it very interesting to hear Voldemort's ideas about the future of magical education, especially regarding discipline (I liked Snape's aside about Filch). It was quite nice of Snape to speak up for Lucius as well.

    I laughed out loud at Alecto snacking on fingernails too; how do you come up with all these crazy details? I love it.

    I wouldn't worry about what they say over at ff.net - they only like fluffy bunny-wunnies over there, I find.
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  • From alleycat88 on December 30, 2007
    Ah Draco! So what part does he play? I liked the plan Voldemort had laid out for the school. Crazy, but good plan. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From sheherazade on December 23, 2007
    Bellatrix just never learns does she? I really like how gloriously deranged she is - and Voldemort was cruel, but that's what she likes about him, presumably.

    The cannibalism chapter was horrific, but true to canon again, as you say.

    I'm interested that you find it a bit worrying that this is the kind of writing you enjoy - does it make it any better to know that there are plenty of writers/artists who cover the same territory? Expressing your imagination artistically is not the same as actually wanting to do/see this kind of thing in RL. I hope it doesn't cause you too much anxiety xx.
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  • From alleycat88 on December 22, 2007
    Bellatrix was punshed! Hehehehe! Nice! Can't wait for the next update!
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