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Reviews for The Sexual Incestual life of the Harry Potter char

By : thegorgonmedusa
  • From betelgeuse on October 10, 2008
    I love incest, and I love this story. E liked even Vernon!! Just one thing: the chapter with Ginny is a little bit brute. Vernon with Harry is gentle and so is Bill while's preparing little Ron; Charlie punished Fred 'cause he was too rude with Ron, so the Weasley's brothers are caring and loving, so I don't understand Arthur's brutality. Hope read soon another chapter
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  • From fanofirwin on October 07, 2008
    Please come back and write some more. This story is so great. ITs original and wonderful.... WHERE DID YOU GOOOO!!???????.. BOO HOO HOO
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  • From JackiePappillion on September 27, 2008
    love it!
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  • From dracoSzsextoi on June 09, 2008
    It's ok, i like the plot. Every one is really young, lol.
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  • From tracyhill on May 20, 2008
    i liked this chapter. i had an image in my head of vernon walking down the stairs and harry bouncing along enjoying the ride! it is nice to see a story where vernon and harry like each other instead of it being non con. maybe in the next chapter we could see harry and vernon again. also petunia and dudley.
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  • From feltonslover on May 13, 2008
    I have never read a fanfic quite like that one. I'd like to read more, especially when they get older and go to Hogwarts.
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  • From firefoxzr on February 23, 2008
    OOO could you have not made ginny be taken in such a manner. it's so wrong. It would have been so much better if she taken gentlely of rough is okay if it was not in such a brute manner. also i hope the next one comes out soon. I'd really like to se more of little harry or ron.
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on February 19, 2008
    OK, I read the warnings and everything and I went into this expecting it to be exactly what I found, however I didn't quite expect to be as affected as what I actually was. I almost threw up after reading the Breaking Ginny chapter, I didn't quite expect Arthur to be THAT horrible, it just screams rape, and that the wizarding world is so corrupted, and that they're all trained from a young age that this is the way things are, you can't change that you're a woman and you're going to be used and abused the rest of your life. And that they are so brainwashed because of this, and that they think it's OK, and the whole society turns out like that so it's accepted as OK, and they continue to teach their children this, against their natural thoughts and feelings, which are then conditioned into how society wants them to feel. If you get them from a young age, they will always think that this is right, this is how things are, when they didn't have to in the first place. That's some seriously fucked up society, and I know you probably didn't mean to create it with this little PWP, but I've been studying dystopian literature currently (things like '1984' by George Orwell(which, btw, is where the origins of the show "Big Brother" came from), "Brace New World" by Aldous Huxley, "The Handmaiden's Tale" Margret Atwood) and it's made me bring all these ideas of authority and control forward in my mind as I read this, it's a way of conditioning the society from a young age, to continue on the corruption.

    I'm sorry, I know this is just a little bit of smut, something not really meaning anything, but this is the reaction I had, and I felt like I had to share it, to write it all down. It's not a bad story really, I mean I'm sure it will develop more and more, and personally, I went into it thinking, great, I've been looking for something like this recently, and to the warning I was like yeah yeah, I've seen it all before, nothing can scare me, but it shocked even me. I think it was because it was het, I'm used to reading these kinds of things in a slash context, and that doesn't affect me all that much, but the things that were something to the effect of "Please Daddy," and "Take it you whore," really unsettled me. It might just be me more so than the actual story, being as issues like these are very touchy issues for me, although I continue to read it in fanfiction.

    Do not take this review as a flame! I only meant to tell you my thoughts, which is what a review is meant for yeah? You're a promising author, and the fact that you could bring up all these thoughts and emotions in me is actually a real compliment to your writing, not many people have been able to do that. Getting your readers thinking and feeling is a good thing, even if the thoughts aren't the best, and it creates outcry in one such as me. So take it to heed, and I hope to see more soon enough.

    If you feel the need to reply to me personally about this, I can be contacted at phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com

    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From HarryVik on February 19, 2008
    Fine but i myself is not into rape to small kids. there are of course somethings that some likes and somethings they don't like. but i will wait for the next chapter, maybe the new one will be more in my taste.
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  • From RyuaAlba on February 17, 2008
    I'd never condone doing it in real life, but damn, it's fun to read when it's late at night and nobody's watching...
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  • From Leentjef on February 14, 2008
    i liked the first to chapters the most , the weasly were not loving or exiting enough
    keep writing and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Articwolf8556 on February 12, 2008
    I think you write very well and I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on February 12, 2008
    Oh my gosh sooo hot need cold shower. Must have more!!!!!!!!!
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  • From sailermoon01 on February 12, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated! I really want to read more of this. I was wondering a couple of things: Will we be able to read about James/Severus and why Harry is not with them? I'd love to read some James/Sev smut! Also, will there be any James/Harry/Severus? I really hope you update soon because I really want to read more soon.
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  • From iamspammer on February 12, 2008
    Interesting chapter. Are you trying to say that Harry & Ginny will be together and whores?

    Oh and as this story is about Harry, maybe more chapters about Harry? and Will Harry always get f...ed or will h e f..k too?

    Just wondering
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