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Reviews for Her Secret Admirer

By : lilbitbord
  • From Persy on January 18, 2022

    Precious and sweet....


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  • From Persy on September 07, 2021

     

    So sweet and romantic!!!!!


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  • From cmstrobridge on May 31, 2013
    A very enjoyable O/S, thank you for sharing.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 29, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on February 19, 2008
    Mysterious, sexy,funny, hot and steamy! Perfect blend for a birthday treat!
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  • From Djenn88 on February 08, 2008
    Simply perfection!!! You are a true artist!
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  • From ANON - Eerie Iri from Fanfiction.Net on December 15, 2007
    I LOVE you! You put two of my favorite pairings in one story( even if Draco/Harry was only mentioned). You totally rock!^____________________________________________________________________________________________^
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 07, 2007
    Chapter 1 (one shot) : I
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  • From lilbitbord on September 10, 2007
    Jen618 and Lil I do thank you for you opinion on this story. I feel I should explain a few things and then add more to my warning at the beginning of this story. I wrote fic very quickly for a challenge. I did have to follow a few guide line. Yes I could have made this a chapter story and drawn out everything, but I didn't want too. I wanted this quick. I may in the furture redo this story and add some "Pre" chapters and explain why the characters are doing the things that they are doing. I knew not everyone would like it, I almost didn't post it on this site because I knew it would get this reaction. I think next time I will trust my gut. I did state that Severus and Hermione both had secret crushes on each other, I don't remember every stating that they love each other, but I guess it could have come across that way. I again do thank you for your opinion, most people just flame and never explain what made them hate it.
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  • From ANON - Lil on September 10, 2007
    This is really sophomoric in a lot of ways (particularly the way everything moves at the speed of light-- Hermione being totally okay with the fact that a snarky bastard she used to loathe asked her out on a date, a single kiss turning into an "Oh, I love you, let's have sex!"-- it doesn't really work like that). There are a lot of details you simply graze over that could make this story a lot better (for instance, Draco's transition to the other side, and Snape's story after the war).

    It has it's moments, but you need a good beta and a few painfully honest test-readers to read first :).

    (Sorry, I don't mean to be rude, and I'm sure as coming off as such, but a lot of people here sugarcoat things that need work, and I just want you to know my actual opinions!)
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  • From Jen618 on September 09, 2007
    My main issue is a 50 yr old man sounding having a "crush" and sounding like he's blushing; and the "love" bit, when they haven't even dated. Even though this is sweet, I guess I got a bit frustrated cause I felt that you could have made this really interesting. I tend to only say that when I like someone's writing.
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  • From lilbitbord on September 08, 2007
    MsBentleySnape- LOL Thanks for the catch. I can't believe that both me and my beta missed that :)

    loony_old_fan-Happy Birthday I'm glad that you liked the story :)

    piggylicious-Thanks you so much for your review. I'm glad that you luv the story :)


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  • From ozarkmoon on September 08, 2007
    Lovely how they got together here. And Draco, well it would serve him right if she spoke all week in great detail of her weekend. One thing, I believe you meant to say "her still-quaking body" instead of "her still quacking body" -- otherwise you might need a beastiality warning on the story. :)
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  • From DanielleHall on September 08, 2007
    WOW and on my birthday too. Thank you, I loved it.
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