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Reviews for Pride & Prejudice (HP DM Style)

By : Lizzardgirl
  • From ANON - Ricky C on June 27, 2010
    so, I realize it's been a few years but I was wondering if you ever picked up this story again? I read the first bit and found it really interesting and I definitely haven't seen another story like it. I think you had something good going with it. If you simply lost interest, have you considered putting it up for adoption? Just a random idea, since it's a shame to leave it with just a taste of what was to come. Anyways, just thought I'd put in my measly two cents :D
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  • From eyeglass82 on September 12, 2007
    um.........okay, first sorry for telling you about that there's already a story that is done this way.
    All I wanted to do is just....well, write better. Didn't meant to threaten you to dump the story.
    Write what ever it is up to your standard, do what you want, don't let other ppl stop you from doing it.
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  • From Niamh17 on September 10, 2007
    The other story isn't a thing like yours.
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  • From ANON - Kelli on September 10, 2007
    Pride and prejudice is my favourite book, and I am a little disappointed that no one has written about it yet. The story you mentioned was only started and it has not been updated in three years.
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  • From ANON - Beloved on September 10, 2007
    Please continue your wonderful Harry Potter version of Pride & Prejudice. It is done so well and I love your version far better than any I have read. I really, really, really love the character placing. As a reader of the book and having watched the movie versions, I must say you have done a beautiful job.
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  • From ANON - VerdantFox on September 10, 2007
    Hello Mrs. Knight!

    I really like your writing style so I think you should continue your story! Just because someone else has already done it doesn't mean that you can't. I mean, look at how many DracoHarry Veela stories there are! I mean WHOA! For all you know, yours could even be better! Don't give up so easily, BELIEVE IN YOURSELF! Even though you've only done one chapter really, I was immediately attached. You should try to continue and just see the response from the readers, then make your decision. You seem like a wonderful writer so don't give up!

    Sincerely,
    VerdantFox

    P.S.-You don't have to listen to me or continue the story if you don't want to. I was just trying to give you some encouragement! Ja ne! ^_^

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  • From ANON - qqhisoka on September 10, 2007
    pleas. don't make Fred & George into those annoying creatures (girls), and please keep all the characters the same, I'm okay with changing Harry into a girl, but the rest..............................-_-|||
    There's a author that already did this, it's called "Facade" http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/malfoi/facade.html
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  • From ANON - vwbug on September 10, 2007
    Very good start. And I think a lemon would be a good ending. Also maybe a flash back sequence when tom riddle gets. Draco's "sister" impregnated might be good.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 10, 2007
    I love this! Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Amiyom on September 09, 2007
    Can you fix the formatting? Everything squished together like that makes it hard to read.
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  • From alleycat88 on September 09, 2007
    oh this story is going to prove to be quite cute!! Do continue with it dear!!
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  • From mumimeanjudy on September 09, 2007
    Ron Weasely as Jane Bennett, calm and non-judgmental? (I picture him more as Kitty - envious of her sisters but not really taking any action to improve her lot). Tom Riddle as Mr. Collins, toadying sycophant? He might make a better Mr. Wickham. And I have seen Snape as Lady Catherine de Bourgh and that always seemed perfect casting, since he sneers down at Harry so much. Hermione has always seemed too spirited to be Charlotte Lucas. Percy as Mary Bennett is perfect, though. If you wanted to get all the Weasleys into your story - don't forget Charlie. Maybe he could be Mr. Darcy's officer friend (cousin?). Instead of making Ginny an extra Bennett, why not give her one of the other female roles that you have listed as original characters? By the way - it should be Norris, not Noriss. And please don't think by my criticism that I don't like the original idea - Harry as Eliza Bennett has been a favourite for a while.

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  • From hpn827 on September 09, 2007
    That's awesome. I definitely want to read that.
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