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Reviews for To Love You At Last

By : hphglover

From Sparkykiki on September 14, 2007
I like it...but I felt like the revealation was a bit rushed. I wanted to see more drama in there. It also left me with unanswered questions like who was the girl? Hopefully you delve deeper into that subject!
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From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2007
Good storyline... The writing could be a lot better, though..
You should describe more.. Try to vary the choice of words..
Hmm.
The characters are quite well done, although the admitedly slip out of character at times.
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From Bigfunk89 on September 11, 2007
Great start please continue I'm very anxious to see where the story goes from here. You are a fantastic writer. Please update soon :) and btw happy birthday from 3 days ago just saw on ur profile that 9/8 was ur birthday. Anyways keep up the good work as usual.
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From ANON - anche22 on September 11, 2007
What an awesome story!! it is so hard to find a good harry/hermione story but you've really got a great plot happening hear! I can't wait to read more please don't forget this story it would be such a waste as you're clearly a talented writer keep up the great work!!
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From Sparkykiki on September 10, 2007
Ohhhh....I'm intrigued! I can't wait to find out what Ron, the prat, did!! Update soon!!
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From ANON - silvershard on September 10, 2007
more please :)
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From SoftObsidian74 on September 10, 2007
Good start...keep going...
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From SnapesSweetheart on September 10, 2007
I love it so far and I can't wait to read more
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