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Reviews for About a Girl

By : salparadise
  • From Utopia on October 15, 2007
    (regarding chapter five)

    I loved how Draco/Greanleaf has realised how the male population of Hogwarts view a pretty girl - from the girls prospective; he/she has probably just realised how demoralising it is to be viewed as just a piece of skirt!

    It was so sweet to see Griffindor turn on the slytherins and tell him/her how horrid they are and offer solidarity and instant friendship!

    The quidditch conversation was well rescued, mostly through sheer luck on their parts. I can see Ginny and Draco/Greenleaf getting along famously!

    Learning to be a girl isn't all that easy... I AM a girl, and I'm rubbish at ladylike!!

    I like how Harry is instantly trying to protect her/him from the Hogwarts-man-whore! Its so Harry and very chivalrous; I presume that Draco and Zabini haven't got through the guard-dogs of the Griffindor boys to bed the ladies of that house! All the loyal, p***ed off boys turning on you wouldn't be pretty! Though, Zabini's actions might just give him the slap in the face he needs - his attitude and ego need a reality check.

    Oh, Malfoy/Greenleaf - welcome to that time of the month, prepare for cramps, mood swings, uncomfortable feelings downstairs, the biggest knickers you can lay your hands on, chocolate cravings... oh, he's in for SUCH a SHOCK!! I can easily see Hermione having to explain the finer points of tampons or towels!

    10/10
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  • From Utopia on October 15, 2007
    (Regarding Chapter Four)

    Malfoy's sleeping in isn't as lazy as Hermione is making out; the female metabolism differs from the male one, so his/her body is having to catch up. Not to mention the multitude of eostrogens and progesterones (and their variations) that are going to be flying around his/her system!

    The BRA INCIDENT! Oh, fabulous! He should have swallowed his pride and just asked for help!

    Shopping with Malfoy/Greanleaf is like shopping with my boyfriend - he's better at it than me! Who's dress sense is he basing his wardrobe on? I don't think he's a witch weekly subscriber, or a fan of vogue? The outfits are rather skimpy, is this the typical Slytherin female dress code??

    Bribing him with eyeliner? Oh, what has the world come to?

    Oh, have they got him a new wand? Surely his own will be easily recognised?

    Once again, brilliant! 10/10
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  • From Utopia on October 15, 2007
    (Regarding Chapter Three)

    "How about Jocelyn? Jocelyn...Greenleaf." Bit of a LOTR fan, are we? Though, you have to admit, Legolas is drop-dead-flipping-gorgeous (and he's mine, mine, mine! lol!) I'm a HUGE lord of the rings fan, nice to see the reference creep in!

    Poor Hermione, having to once again, be the plain one who's the brains behind the operation! I don't think most of Hogwarts realise she's female, and to have prima donna, model-looks Malfoy (sorry, Greanleaf), coming in and showing her up is probably making her a bit upset.

    Once again, a pleasure to read. Thank-you for writing this - you're making my day!

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  • From Utopia on October 15, 2007
    (Regarding Chapter Two)

    I loved Hermione's little vindictive moment - such a shame her head girl attitude won out! I'd like to see a bit of revenge!

    I also liked that you had her laughing her arse off! She's human after all, and would find this amusing!

    I thought Draco ALREADY suffered from PMS? He's permanently snippy, permanently moody, very angry, easily p**ed off...

    10/10, a real giggle to read; a nice, light-hearted fic that has the reader laughing in sheer vengeful pleasure!
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  • From Utopia on October 15, 2007
    (Regarding Chapter One)

    What the HECK did Neville do wrong to manage that!?! If it was a potion to ease menstrual pains, then I could understand the feminine reference... but still... that's impressive, in a rather macarbe way!

    I like how they blindfolded him/her before Malfoy woke up. Was it an instant change, was he female when he was carried to the hospital wing, or was it a little bit more gradual?

    I thought they'd have a spare set of clothes handy, hospital gowns tend to be backless and do a rubbish job at providing heat (trust me, I know).

    Why is Dumbledore so happy? Is this little plot of his design, a method to change Malfoy's attitudes or is he finding this just as amusing as the rest of us?

    Is the woman you're describing Draco, if he was actually born with XX chromosomes, rather than XY? Though, you did say he didn't look like his mother, but the blonde hair, blue eyes are recessive genes - so evidently run in the family - perhaps he resembles a great, great grandmother?

    I did actually quite like how he was going to 'explore' his body to make him a better shag - typical, but it shows he isn't as selfish in bed as out of it; he wants his partners to enjoy it and pass on his reputation as a sex god! Anybody got the guts to introduce him to the rampant rabbit and a packet of batteries - that would show that women only need men because the lawn won't mow itself! LOL! And a bloke experiencing female orgasm, which lasts ten seconds longer than the male one (on average), is more intense and is ready to go again (and again and again and again...) in a few minutes!

    I'm enjoying this fic a LOT, please continue it - just to keep us ladies giggling and cheering!

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  • From lozzapilgrim on October 01, 2007
    Hahaha! Thats so funny!! Please continue soon! Lol I want to know how he gets round this one!
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  • From BloodyLove on September 29, 2007
    Haha that was great. I love this. Is Harry going to start to like the girl Draco because he isn't gushing all over him for being Harry Potter? That would be too funny. Well I hope you update soon.
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  • From ichiruki on September 27, 2007
    Nice Draco Malfoy on pms, I get my wish! You have to update soon!
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  • From on September 25, 2007
    I had doubts about this but once I started reading it I couldn't stop. The dialogue is amazing and hilarious. I love this story, you have to update it asap.
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  • From Sparkykiki on September 25, 2007
    hehehehe! payback's a biatch! can't wait to see what you have in story for "Jocelyn". :D
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  • From IrishChic20 on September 25, 2007
    Omigod! LOL! I so wish this would happen to my husband. In fact it'd be nice to let him have our next child!
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  • From luvhp on September 24, 2007
    LOL< I love your story. It's better than the others, I like Draco being a girl. Hope you will continue this.
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  • From ichiruki on September 17, 2007
    awesome, I find this so hilarious!
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  • From BloodyLove on September 15, 2007
    Ha ha this is funny. I really want to know how this is going to turn out. So please update soon.
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  • From LCGrabski on September 14, 2007
    I can't believe you left it on that! I was so most definitely wrapped up in the story that when I saw there wasn't another chapter I was severely disappointed. I'll be checking rather frequently to see if there is an update. I just can't wait. This is like every woman's revenge on men piece. Make them go through the worst parts about being a woman and then show them all the kick ass stuff later.
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