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Reviews for Dragon: The Silver Eyed Killer

By : Kaspjo
  • From MisstressNicole on October 23, 2007
    Not bad, a few mistakes but you kept the suspense that you'd built up. I'm going to venture a guess and say the boy he saved was Blaise. It's just a guess. I want to say more but I really don't have much to say. I was surprised as hell that Draco had been the one to kill James Potter. I was flabbergasted, and the way it was done. I mean with as many bullets as he used he couldn't have been to recognizable. Some how I didn't find it as surprising that he killed his own father, I'd already guessed that he couldn't have had a great childhood. And you're right it can't be rape if you enjoy it, can it? There's a part where you typed the color red as read.

    Nicole
    MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 19, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 4!
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  • From bananasforyou on October 19, 2007
    i love the ending of the chap! no im the devil!
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  • From shey on October 04, 2007
    Oh My, that was utterly sweet in some parts & intense in others, loved it!
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  • From MisstressNicole on September 19, 2007
    This story is really interesting. I can't wait for more. You are one of the better authors on this site. You have a few mistakes, mostly typos but nothing big. I'm infatuated with the story line. You don't find stories like this everywhere and when you do they focus mainly on the love/romance then the action/drama. Draco seems so powerful in this. This story is amazing, even with only two chapters posted. We get to see Draco's personality but we don't fully understand it. Your character developement is gradual and I like that. The story doesn't seemed rushed. My sister has a fanfiction site that is realitively new, and she's trying to get it up and running. As I see stories that I think are great I ask the authors to post them on her site. Now I'm extending this offer to you. We are trying to build a base of stories and authors that actually can write and are good at the skill. You fall into this category. You can find her site through the following link. theStorybook.telayout.net.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2007
    *shivers*

    ...this is good!
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  • From alma on September 19, 2007
    awesome chapter!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 19, 2007
    i love it !!!:) XD
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 19, 2007
    Holy moly! Chapter 3 please!!!!
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  • From Danine on September 18, 2007
    Oh dying, Draco and Harry are so utterly sweet. Harry seems to bring out the softy in Draco, which makes my heart flutter. I love this! Riddle, oh *swoon* as the crime boss, that's fantastic. I want to know what happened to Harry, what led up to this!!
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  • From Extraho on September 18, 2007
    my smirk is so wide it reaches both of my ears. i love iit
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  • From loving on September 18, 2007
    I really love this story, going back and forth to the present as well is something that I like. I wonder what they did to harry though.
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  • From alma on September 14, 2007
    OMFG!!!! this is going to be a great story, I can tell.
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  • From MisstressNicole on September 13, 2007
    I don't remember if this was a one shot or not. Please tell me you have a whole story to go with this. Tell me you have a plot built around this. This is too god to leave like this. It'd be a crime to leave it here and leave me wondering. Draco, an hired hit man or a paid assassin. I guess it really doesn't matter, eh? I'm a really big fan of AU/AR's especially a realy well written one. In my imagination when I picture on of them older, I always see it as Draco. For some reason it just seems wrong to picture him as the younger of the two. When I say older and younger I mean a big difference in age. Wel not exactly big seeing how I've never dated someone under 10 years older then me. There are a few mistakes that a quik read over would fix, that you could do anytime. Say, while you are posting a second chapter...heh. It was worth a try. I really enjoyed the way it was written. Very little actual dialogue. Silent, cold and lethal. Just how I like my men. Not to mention blond, and hot. Lol. You are a wonderful writter who I sure it very busy finishing this story, one chapter at a time of course. It's the stuff good prologues are made from! I'm not going to give up you know, you can tell me no till the cows come home. Okay, I'm going to leave you alone so you can write the rest of this story. Have a nice day.

    ~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

    PS Ignore all the begging if this was never a oneshot.
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  • From MangaForever on September 12, 2007
    interesting
    pls update dis again soon
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