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Reviews for A Man Cannot Control His Dreams

By : UnexpectedNudity
  • From ANON - HentaiZaru on November 07, 2009
    YAY! You updated! I'm so happy. Update soon!
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  • From on November 06, 2009
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    Oh dear gods all above.
    That last bit was... poignant. Course it didn't help that my playlist switched to 'the heart asks the pleasure first' and I was like... well awed-in-the-sense-of-ten-thousand-hotdogs. Hmm.
    To tell the truth I started reading this last year(?) I think it was and I got to just after the first sex scene and I was like 'noooo, not another Harry-is-nothing-but-a-sex-toy-story' and to my shame... I stopped reading there. Though in my defense I had just read several depressing Harry-as-a-sex-object stories that all ended in horrible depression and angst and I needed something else.
    Now I'm really glad I came back to it and I smack my past self for jumping to conclusions. Never assume. You would think I'd know that lesson by heart, yet I have to keep learning it.
    Because this is a very good story. Not only does it have incredibly hot sex scenes that make ones spine tingle but it has an awesome plot line as well. There is a story!! Not just smut, like so many stories on this site.
    There's angst dispersed in a nice mixture with a good enough dose of humour so as not to be overpowering. And the relationship between Snape and Harry is developing nicely. They're even staying true to the basic characteristics of what makes them who they are.
    And I love Neville's complete denial of what he saw. Although I hope that Harry's not going to completely cut his friends from his life.
    One final thing: When Harry called Snape the defender of his innocence I laughed so hard. It's sarcastic on it's own right, but coupled with the fact that Snape is having sex with Harry... bwahahaha!
    Anyway, great story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    With Sweet Vengence
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 30, 2009
    Ooooh I missed this story, love the update. I do hope their relationship will continue to grow
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  • From Extraho on October 30, 2009
    wow. I really love this story. It's amazing. Could you put me on your up-date list? Thanks.

    extraho_606@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - S.S on October 30, 2009
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more xxx
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  • From ANON - Drift on October 22, 2009
    Somehow, no matter how many times I re-read this story, I can never get over how well written and amazing it is. This must have been the fourth or fifth time I actually have managed to make it through the entire story, and I'm definitely not getting anywhere close to having read it too many times.

    Can't wait for the new chapter
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  • From ANON - Katalyst on September 06, 2009
    I would very much like more of this
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2009
    ohhhhhh~~~
    it's starting to more intense, and feeling are coming forth.
    in the beginning SS seemed like he was using HP yet not quite, but the feeling that he was could not really be shaken. Now its more like he's trying to convince himself that that's all he's doing but it's really not.
    the story has a very intense and sexy atmosphere to it.
    i look forward to seeing more of the story, so pleaseeeee update soon :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2009
    Wow! I read the whole of what you've posted in one sitting. You have a gift, don't stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Tree on August 23, 2009
    Wow. wowowowowowowow. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on August 21, 2009
    Ah ha!!! Yes!!!! I knew you wouldn't let me down!!! Thanks for the new chapters..... keep writing! KEEP WRITING!!!!

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  • From Narcoleptic86 on August 20, 2009
    Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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  • From Elphaba on August 19, 2009
    I have read this whole story through and it is simply amazing. You have done a wonderful job. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Briarrows69 on August 18, 2009
    Probably the first Harry/Snape that I've managed to keep an interest in for awhile. I'd like to read more please...
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  • From starstruck86 on August 18, 2009
    I've spent the last few days reading through all of your chapters, and I adore this fic.

    Severus is characterised beautifully, right down to his stoicism being determined to reach his rooms half dead. (But, *whimper* poor bloke).

    I really can't wait for more, but i'm a bit scared now as I saw you said something about it being a year between updates. *wide eyed* Not sure I could live with that ;)

    xx
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