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Reviews for A Man Cannot Control His Dreams

By : UnexpectedNudity
  • From linky4u on August 18, 2009
    Wow ,thanks for the quick update!!Love the story so far,can
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  • From ANON - Drift on August 17, 2009
    I CANNOT PUT INTO WORDS HOW EXCITED I AM TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER BEING UP
    I just read them both instead of watching my movie and it was totally worth it |D;;;
    Can't wait to see the next chapter, greatly looking forward to it. Poor Severus. He deserves a nice, big hug and a kiss for putting up with this.
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  • From ANON - dee on August 17, 2009
    Oh my god... this is fantastic. I just read everything you have posted in one shot... Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous.

    I adore the dub-con dynamic, and the stockholm syndrome Harry. I think my favorite bit about the snarry dynamic you've built is Snape's emotions toward Harry. He clearly has some positive feelings toward Harry... what they are I don't know, but the fact that he was able to use (and you must mean it to use it) the Cruciatus curse on Harry during sex completely blows my mind. I think your Harry is painfully accurate - noble and self sacrificing and so STUPID... you can see the subtle changes his time in the dungeons have wrought, but he's still unwilling/unable to really face up to his own culpability in his life.

    I love so many things about this work... so much of the interaction is subvocal, so when Snape actually points the obvious rules they'd been operating under out to Harry, it draws me (as a reader) in further because I can honestly feel Snape's disdain for Gryffindor idiocy. I'm reviewing this from a phone, so too lengthy of a review is impractical, but I really adore the marvelous characterizations you've done here.

    Thanks for sharing this piece!
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  • From infinitehelix on August 17, 2009
    I love your style, to be sure. You have an almost devilish way with words and masochism. I do like the way you've portrayed Severus, he is utterly believable and human. Also, please to be updating soon.
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  • From on August 13, 2009
    *dies by turning into a puddle*
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  • From on August 12, 2009
    ... Okay...
    HOLY CRAP!!!
    Not only was the sex hot! But the story is actually really good. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on August 10, 2009
    For the love of god, keep going!!!!!
    SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY SERIOUSLY
    I love these little sparks of affection between the two... and if I may make a request, I would like to see Harry tied up at some point.
    Keep writing!! Pretty pretty please with whipped cream and shackles on top!
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  • From Makovaso on July 24, 2009
    good chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Luie on June 18, 2009
    Are you going to come back to this story? I love reading it!
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  • From pontaloon on May 30, 2009
    you sort of cut up actions into many short chapters. you could easily combine them to make a few decently long chapters and the story would flow much more smoothly. you also start alot of chapters with 'and' or 'but' which is gramatically incorrect.
    on the plus side, i absolutely love how you've characterized snape and harry! you managed to take something so completely out of character (them sleeping together) and make it so believeable!
    update soon! i can't wait!
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  • From soloflamelady on April 20, 2009
    I really hope you continue this it is a wonderful story and I am hooked I would love to see the love realized and for Harry to triumph.
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  • From Makovaso on March 25, 2009
    good story, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - fallingrey on March 16, 2009
    Please update this soon! I check back all the time to see if you've updated and I swear feel like I've been waiting forever! It is seriously one of my absolute favorite Snarry fics because it actually MAKES SENSE. Your Harry and Snape actually seem like Harry and Snape in this kind of situation. Too many people completely miss the mark in characterization (which is why I absoultely hate the overly romantic Snarry fics) but you're spot on. Plus this story is also hot as fuck. Please update this!
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  • From ANON - Lrnd on November 16, 2008
    I LOVE this story. I love the way it's written and the control that SS exerts. I would like to see more of HP POV but otherwise AMAZING! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - solerine on October 06, 2008
    I seriously love this story sooooo much! I have never read such a good angst story of this couple in a long time. I find it facinating and on the edge of my seat every chapter.
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