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Reviews for A Man Cannot Control His Dreams

By : UnexpectedNudity
  • From Lain872 on March 30, 2008
    i. love. this. story.

    believe me, i've read umpteenth snarry fics and this is so one of the best i've come across. though in some points i don't agree *completely* with your portrayal of their characters, you almost always get them spot on. and the tension between harry and snape in the first 6 or so chapters had my toes curling. it really was so deliciously done. also, the way their relationship is developing is so realistic, i absolutely love it. and i can't stop reading and i personally usually read unfinished stories because i hate cliff hangers. so please continue! i am a devoted fan now!!!

    thank you for this wonderful piece of fiction.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 30, 2008
    Yup this chapter still has that poetic flow to it and I absolutely love it.

    I am starting to see the more emotional side to this story, meaning I am seeing a deeper relationship between them in this now. It's simply wonderful :D
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  • From mikaela717 on March 28, 2008
    Aw, Harry's so cute
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  • From mikaela717 on March 28, 2008
    Beautiful
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  • From Jilliane on March 28, 2008

    Ooooh, that was painfully short, but very intriguing!! Hmm.....what could this new desire be?


    Dying for the next update......


    (and thanks for the mention! :D )
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  • From senselesslust on March 27, 2008
    AWWWWWWWW SNAPEY


    see you saturday, pretty girl!
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  • From crimsonvipera on March 27, 2008
    Oh!.. A twist! Severus gets new ideas. I like it very much. This story is almost scorching hot, and if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, I can't seem to remember any. Keep up the good work.

    CV

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  • From senselesslust on March 26, 2008
    YES YES FINALLY!! Oh Snarry porn, how I've missed you!
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  • From Nikte on March 26, 2008
    This chapter has made it to my top ten of most erotic chapters ever written in fanfiction, I JUST LOVED IT!!!!! And therefore you are awarded the biggest piece of my strawberry and cream birthday cake. xoxo
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  • From SilverFalls on March 26, 2008
    It has been some time since I have read a story so well thought out and well written. I look forward to reading more soon.

    Good luck on your computer repair.
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  • From Jilliane on March 26, 2008
    Like SilverPhoenix, I too had to go back and re-read the story before I could review the latest update. Whew! I remember why I love this story, and what an excellent writer you are. Simply breathtaking. This story is undoubtedly one of the better written ones on this site, and is absolutely one of the most erotic. It's no surprise that you have over 24,000 hits, over 200 reviews, and over 100 ratings. Like Harry, who cannot resist the dark and sensual allure of Severus, so I cannot resist the allure of your writing and this story. Like Severus has done to Harry, you have enthralled me and keep me gasping for more. I admire the way that you end each chapter, at just the right place to guarantee both extreme frustration that there isn't more, and extreme anticipation for what's to come. Absolutely brilliant, and you are a master at it.

    If you have a mailing list for updates, please add me to it. jillianetpr@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 26, 2008
    Oh wow what a chapter, this makes up for the long wait. This had a poetic feel to it, they way they interact in the bedroom, how Severus talks to Harry makes it even more sensual than before. You writing has changed a bit, for the better to.

    Update again soon
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  • From SilverPhoenix69 on March 26, 2008
    Ohhh you updated!..I can't read this now, as I'll have to reread the whole story *sigh* My memory is so bad. I do remember it, don't get me wrong, but not enough to appreciate the new chapter. You will be hearing from me soon!
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  • From ANON - Hazelaar on March 08, 2008
    Every time I read this story, I just can't believe how good it is. Your Snape, gods, it gives me shivers just thinking about him. The sharp wit and biting insults and, damn, the sex, are just so amazing. *gah* Can't think straight. Haha, probably shouldn't have written this review right after reading through the story yet again, you have me out of sorts as always. The thing that makes it all the better is that the "relationship" can actually make sense. There's no real out-of-character jarring moments that can stutter other fics. And your sex writing is perfect, explicit to the point where I don't feel gypped, but not explicit to the point of redundancy with pages of the same descriptions over and over again. The dominance aspect is at just the perfect level for me, and I lovelovelove that you have so much from Snape's point of view. It. Is. Awesome.
    (Oh, and love confused!Neville. He's so cute when he's all conflicted.)
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  • From ANON - Ryu on March 04, 2008
    Updaaaaaaaate!!!Please!!!
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