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Reviews for Revelations of the Heart

By : Bonza87
  • From ANON - Lucifer on October 24, 2007
    Wow...this is just Wow. In reading these chapters I can just only imagine, let alone feel the sexual tension building up between them. I have read many books where there is little to no build up at all and right from the very start of it I felt like I was going to pop. And this comes from a guy!!!! Please update soon. I wanna see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Equinox on October 13, 2007
    Hi! This was my first time reading your story and I love it! Its very well written and the smut is well written and placed in the story, i'm looking forward to reading more. :)

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  • From jackaniny on October 11, 2007
    Woo! Great stuff. I really liked Ron's advice.
    Keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From p0rtk3y on October 11, 2007
    Wow you're good. The story is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing this story to us.
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  • From ANON - Brit. on October 10, 2007
    Hey there. Just wanted to drop a note to say how much I like your fic so far.. Haha. I'm lame but that's okay I think. Really good job especially for your first fanfic I think. I've read some really bad ones, but I honestly can't wait to see waht happens next :P What a tease she is.
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  • From ANON - Zeelthor on October 10, 2007
    Wooohooo, I was mentioned in the story xD

    It's good.. Both Ron and Harry are quite well in character.. A few slips here and there, but nothing really noticable.
    Not that much smut -Sobs- but I guess I'll live.

    As for the part to come, I hope you do something as erotic as the first chapter with hermione teasing Harry under the table and that..
    There are so many cliched ways by now, but I'm sure you'll do it well.

    Good luck.
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  • From todraw13 on October 10, 2007
    i love this story. i cant wait for the next chapter.
    i cant wait to see the chase...
    thanks for the update
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  • From todraw13 on October 09, 2007
    thanks for the update. i like your writing style and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From HarmoniousPie on October 05, 2007
    Wow! It would have been funny if she had gone over to where Harry was under the invisiblity cloack and actaullly touched it and almost caught him but then decided that it was just something else.
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  • From dracosgirl on September 28, 2007
    Loving it so far! Next chapter please!!!
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  • From ANON - mimy on September 27, 2007
    Merry Christmas!


    This story is soooooo HOT.

    You are doing a great job. Keep up the great work.

    Thanks


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  • From hoser41 on September 26, 2007
    Well, Hermione obviously knew that Harry was watching her and decided to give him a show. I hope that you don't make poor Harry wait too long to realize what he feels for Hermione. Anxiously waiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - CV on September 25, 2007
    Wow... I love the story so far! I especially like your writing style. Not bad for your first adult fan-fic. You've definitely got a new fan. I can't wait 'til the next update so please update soon!
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  • From Sparkykiki on September 25, 2007
    very nice. the tease that hermione is! why do i suspect that she knew harry was there?
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  • From ANON - Michael Bulaich on September 24, 2007
    This is going to be good. Can't wait for more. Harry and Hermione forever.
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