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Reviews for 'The Wedding'

By : NutsAboutHarry
  • From ANON - fstimereview on January 24, 2008
    hi,
    ive read "the proposal" & "the wedding". I like them both very much. The recent chapters you had to rewrite have a different style, compared to your older ones - less repetetive. though i cant decide if it is better or not. Anyway, I enjoyed reading them.

    a longterm? reader
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  • From ANON - Vineshia on January 21, 2008
    Fantastic. I've read both your fics and I love them both. I can't wait for more I'll be watching out for more! This is fantastic. My only complaint is that JK announced that Neville marries Hannah Abbott, but none the less I love the story and your work keep up the great work!
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  • From eavey on January 19, 2008
    so i just had to say this, but the part where you wrote that Mack was talking in a cockney accent was brilliant. I have never seen anyone write that accent well enough to be able to understand it. I am only half way through ch10 but I am loving it. I wish you updated more than once a week. oh well, I guess I will have to live with the antisipation...

    ~Erin
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  • From Pumkin on January 19, 2008
    i loved your first story and this one is just as good. please update soon. keep up the good work.
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  • From violist03 on January 18, 2008
    YAY!!! I love seeing new chapters in this story!
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  • From shrink908 on January 18, 2008
    I loved that chapter.. Very long, took me a bit to read.. But well written and fun.. :) I love the walking in on people bit..

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  • From ANON - Timothy on January 18, 2008
    Hey, great story. Thanks for updating. If your looking for constructive criticism, I'd say try to watch out for misspellings or repeated/dropped words. If you need help as far as beta-ing or proofreading, just ask and I'll be more than happy to help. Otherwise, I think it's a wonderful story and I love it. So please, keep up the good work and continue with the story.
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  • From violist03 on January 11, 2008
    YAY!!! a Wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see who it is!! somehow i'm betting Dudley... weird!
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  • From rakanasama on January 11, 2008
    please dont tell me its dudley...........
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  • From HermesThriceGreat on January 09, 2008
    I just found this and your previous story recently, and I've enjoyed them very much. I must say, it is evident that you much great thought and effort into them, but there is little evidence of proofreading. For me as a reader, I find it very frustrating to have to pause in order to figure out where, if any, punctuation or missing words go. Yes, I understand it may be tedious, but a well put together story will be more read throughs and more read throughs will get you more of those reviews you so love. I know that I often stop reading stories if I have to do too much work in reading them and using my Trelawney-level of ESP skills to guess at what the author meant or thought s/he was saying. I am glad I did not do so with you.

    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From shadows77769 on January 08, 2008
    gah loveddddddd the new chapter ^ ^


    dont like the ending tho lol

    ill be wondering about that for a while now =]

    update soon ;)
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  • From shrink908 on January 08, 2008
    Very nice chapter.. I enjoyed it immensely.. :)
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  • From shadows77769 on January 05, 2008
    i just reread this story

    and i love it again =D
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  • From shrink908 on December 14, 2007
    I enjoyed this chapter.. Particularly the public sex scene.. :>

    Glenn
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  • From violist03 on December 10, 2007
    I really really liked it! I think you should keep up with the Quidditch as well as his other jobs. I mean, it's just wasn't the same without Quidditch. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
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