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Reviews for Come and Play

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  • From chyara on January 14, 2008
    great one shot!
    I wonder what their story is? How the got together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ShilohDarke on December 26, 2007
    I loved this! it was a really good one shot! I don't get to read or write fan fiction much anymore,(I'm so busy with the stories that will actually make the money) but I just had to sneak off to read some this morning... Glad I found this one!
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  • From bluezauza on October 22, 2007
    oooohhhh! Lucius!!!!
    I have to say your Lucius storys are the best! Thanks
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  • From Utopia on October 22, 2007
    A nice little twist at the end; I've read something similar in a Draco/Hermione fic - but this was undoubtedly more to my taste, I have a small (ok, huge) thing for a certain Lord Malfoy, and oh to be Hermione in this story!

    The smut was very good, and handled tastefully throughout (I truly dislike crass smut). The description was plentiful, I could easily imagine all the situations you painted. Nice to see the Malfoy's happy - I'm a wimp for a happy ever after.

    10/10, a pleasure to read!
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  • From tootie on October 03, 2007
    Why can't Luscious,oops, Lucius really exist? Can't count the number of times that I've fantasized about tying Goldylocks up and having my wicked way with him and of course afterwards he can't live without me. What the hell did I do before nasty little Malfoy fanfiction came along? Love your way of thinking and I am also enjoying Match. I'm from the seventies, so that brought back some memeories also. I like sense of humor also, I get tired of the ruthless deatheater sometimes, even Lucius must laugh at times without losing his haughty dignity.
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  • From siriwolf on September 24, 2007
    great story!
    it's so hot!
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  • From Domine on September 21, 2007
    You already know I love your writing. Awesome! Hair pulling is the best.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2007
    Soooo cute:) Great job. I was hooked from the beginning of the oneshot. Lucas? I wish I could have had read more about him. He sounds like a true little slytherin already. And Draco was here as well. My favorite wizard. I can't wait to read more of your work.

    Lady Serpentina
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  • From on September 17, 2007
    I had no idea! What a great story!!!
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  • From skydancer on September 17, 2007
    heeeheeeee * snort* *giggle* oh that was goooooood......

    loved the Draco/Lucas bit at the end too!
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  • From Lupinswolfie on September 17, 2007
    Aw, you get my first reveiw ever on AFF--even though I've posted stories, I don't usually review. However, I love Lucius (yummy) and this was very good! I never expected them to be married, although perhaps I should have. The Lucius in my story is a bad boy, so it was nice to read one where's he's good! *shivers*
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  • From DB1 on September 16, 2007
    Loved the story!!!! I love Hermione and lucius fics, and people should write more of them...and not just one shots..even though they are hot!!!

    *DB*
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 16, 2007
    Chapter 1: You've captured both Hermione and Lucius beautifully, showing each of them at their confident best and done it all in a one-shot. The plot was tight and intriguing right from the start and I was swept into the maelstrom of an exceptional bit of smut. Adding the glimpse into their daily lives at the end was like a lovely frothy dessert after a gourmet meal. Wonderful writing and great characterization. Just superb.
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  • From Malfoysgirl on September 16, 2007
    Whoo! Loved this story! Great Job! Keep up the great work.
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