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  • From NightLo on September 22, 2007
    ...Pansy is still Pansy, I am just hoping she will not do something stupid, e.g. help Tom...

    BTW, being a king, should James not send all people out already? Or would he consult opinions from his loyalties or a magician???
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  • From alma on September 21, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 21, 2007
    What happens in chapter 5? Can Draco not win Harry over?
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  • From eyeglass82 on September 21, 2007
    The tech was referring penguins having any tech at all.
    And the thought of Snape caring enough to get the pic for the penguin is almost as disturbing as having him 'personally'[nicely] put it on the penguin. After all, he is not a nice goody person here.

    But the portrait was funny. XD Voldie is such a weirdo
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  • From Nikte on September 20, 2007
    WOW!!!!!!!! This is the funniest story I've read in a while, I really like it. Please update soon. Oh, by the way what does Dumbledore has to do with the kidnap of Harry, Ron and Raven?

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  • From anniea on September 20, 2007
    hey update soon though, i hate to mention it but i think you need a beta. i'm sorry if this offends but it's cramping your style of writing and it's dragging you down. KEEP IN MIND THAT I LIKE THIS STORY. i wouldn't be reading it this far if i didn't! a lot of the mistakes that i saw wouldn't have been caught by just a spell check. even if you had someone just proofread it, it would help you find and fix the mistakes. update soon *kisses*
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  • From NightLo on September 20, 2007
    ...they are princes and princess!!! Well...well...well...as Harry is in peril danger (from Tom), if ever Draco can get proof and show his sincere love, as he is prince of Egypt...then he can make a good proposal to James...same apply to Blaise and Ron.

    BTW, would Raven get her chance? And who will she pair up with? And...I like the idea of tying the snakes!!!
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  • From alma on September 20, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 20, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 4! Draco and Blaise should send a note to the King and Queen. To make them worry is uncalled for. *smirk* Well the good thing is Tom thinks they've escaped.
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  • From Annie on September 20, 2007
    I'm loving this!
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  • From DracoHarry on September 19, 2007
    I DON'T like Draco. He is an ass hole. If you still need a beta, I would be more than happy to help. My e-mail addy is princess52287@hotmail.com
    Keep up the great work.
    Kat
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  • From NightLo on September 19, 2007
    This starts off interestingly, please update soon!

    BTW, would Draco know about Tom's plan? And how's about Harry, Ron and Raven parents??? And Pansy, Hermione and Dean? Would they help?
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  • From eyeglass82 on September 19, 2007
    How do you raise a penguin in the middle of a desert, more like how is a penguin going to stay alive in all that heat!!!???
    And why does a ordinary penguin from the wild have a locket and a picture, both human technology that animals does not know how to use?!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 18, 2007
    Oh tooo funny! Sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From DracoHarry on September 18, 2007
    That was great. I hope you keep going. Keep up the great work.
    Kat
    ps. Don't let Voldie rape Harry. Please. That would just ruin this for me.

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