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Reviews for The Desert Jewel

By : kitsuneEmpress
  • From Nikte on January 22, 2008
    So glad you updated!!!! I really liked this chapter, but I must say you were a little mean, you promised that Raven's man will be coming, who is he?!?! Well, you get a big box of chocaltes, thanks so much for the smut xoxo.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 21, 2008
    Uh oh! Tom is ready to put his plan to work. I sooo need chapter 8!
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  • From amazingZ on January 19, 2008
    the plot seems very interesting all by itself. the grammer ruins it though. i'd try for a beta. also, try to be more descriptive with your sentences. it'd help your story a lot.
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  • From NightLo on January 19, 2008
    ...they are finally together, with intimate contact and vows and promising future~~~ would they be too love-blinded to notice the lurking darkness?
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 11, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 7!
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  • From NightLo on December 30, 2007
    ...again, this is just too short...can you update sooner? As we have waited for a while...
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  • From tash1021 on September 28, 2007
    this story is soo cute^.^
    ...but shouldn't ron an harry send a note to their mom
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  • From DracoHarry on September 28, 2007
    This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the fucking fantastic work.
    Kat
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  • From Nikte on September 27, 2007
    Ron is so cute!!!!!! I mean wanting to look good for Blaise, and I can't belive Harry took so calmly the date thing, I'm glad he is supporting his brother. On the other hand there
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  • From NightLo on September 27, 2007
    BTW, I have totally in for Sasuke x Naruto....all other pairings are nothing compare with them...just like Draco and Harry, they are dedicated for each other!!!

    Ron has falled for Balise...and how does Harry feel?? Actually this is very important!! And what secrets of Harry can Raven disclose to Draco?
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  • From NightLo on September 27, 2007
    BTW, I have totally in for Sasuke x Naruto....all other pairings are nothing compare with them...just like Draco and Harry, they are dedicated for each other!!!

    Ron has falled for Balise...and how does Harry feel?? Actually this is very important!! And what secrets of Harry can Raven disclose to Draco?
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  • From alma on September 27, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From RRW on September 26, 2007
    The plot and concept is well thought out and the flow of your story is quite fun. Please, please, please go through spell check before you load your file. I am really enjoying this story but there are a large number of spelling errors, like when you wrote clam for calm (or at the end in your a/n when you wrote flour it for floor it).
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 26, 2007
    Will Raven help Draco? Please tell me Dumbledore wasn't stupid enough to put them in the dolls! Sooo need chapter 6!
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  • From Nikte on September 23, 2007
    So Ron is already falling??? I knew it, I mean he has a bad temper, but he isn't as stubborn as Harry, and Blaise isn't that much of an asshole, as Draco is sometimes, so the road was easier for them. What Tom is doing, well its just creepy and disgusting!!! but I think his attitude really adds to the story. About Pansy I LOVED THE SLAP HER MOTHER GAVE HER!!!!!!!!!!!! She really deserved it. Anyway, change of subject, is there going to be someone for Raven? Is that someone going to be Severus? It's just an idea that popped into my mind, after all, Severus and Wormtail (eewww!!!) are the only other male characters you have mentioned to be at the palace. Well in a few words, I liked this chapter and I hope your update soon.
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