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Reviews for Master

By : AkashaTheKitty
  • From mlui on December 17, 2008
    I liked this story, especially how he tried to save her. Even though he couldn't save her anymore, he still was able to send her away. I know you said there would be no sequel, but maybe you'll change your mind in the future? Or at least write a short epilogue...please? Or if someone else continues it, do let us readers know! =)
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  • From ANON - jlclark on November 20, 2008
    OMG!! This was such a good story. It is so original and very well written. Someone else had noted in an earlier review that if you ever run out of ideas you could always come back to this and I have to say I think that would a spectacular idea. They met up several years down the road after the war is over the baby is growing up and see what type of relationship develops from there. It is just a little food for thought but since you are the creative genius I am guessing you will not be running out of plot lines any time soon. In any event really great story and I look forward to reading more of our work.
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  • From ANON - ace on August 26, 2008
    you should make a sequel going through the war and everything, you could easily make a novel length sequel, this would make a very good story and i would definately read a sequel.
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  • From emmibubbles07 on February 06, 2008
    So...in my mind I
    really convinced
    myself that this
    was a story.
    Made me sad that
    it was a one-shot.
    I loved the ending though.
    And the way you filled us
    in on how Draco really is...
    Brilliant.

    By the way..MAJOR fan of
    Silencio. That is one hell
    of a cliffie that you left.

    10/10 on both stories!
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  • From ANON - sa on January 09, 2008
    wow, that was so heartbreakingly sad!!! i feel like crying for him!

    i've not read any of your other fics but i will now!! i love your Draco and here, the bitter-sweet ending works so well!
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  • From ANON - Catiie on November 17, 2007
    amaaaaaazing :]

    enough said.
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  • From Tootsie on November 13, 2007
    Let's me correct this, this story isn't one-shot right? I need more. cheer!
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  • From ANON - Brilliant Demise on October 08, 2007
    an all-time fave
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  • From lozzapilgrim on October 01, 2007
    In some sick way I liked this. He tried to save her because he loved her but couldn't. I know u said u wouldn't do a sequel but maybe one day when u've run out of plot ideas (god forbid) u might continue this... like when the war is over and she has to save him... hmm??

    Off to read ur other stories anyway!! :D
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  • From ANON - Danielle on September 29, 2007
    OMG I love it!

    Sick, right? Me loving the rape stories? Oh well.... I've been corrupted for quite some time now...

    I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!

    OOC... :P Please I wish all stories were like this... (twisted? yes)
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  • From Lupinswolfie on September 23, 2007
    Excellent story---which is the problem! LOL!! I recently wrote and submitted a oneshot to GrangerEnchanted. I had a couple reviewers say that my story reminded them of yours, so I checked yours out. They are eerily similar. I thought I had finally come up with an original idea, and apparently so have you (but yours was posted first). Mine has a possible sequel and the writing styles are different, but I thought it would be best to make you aware of this and I hope, if you ever get a chance to read my story "Does She Know" at GE, that you don't have a problem with this. If you do, then email me and we'll go from there--the last thing I want to do is infringe upon another author's work, no matter how unintentional!!!
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  • From titfortat on September 23, 2007
    How do you do it. How did you make me fall in ,love with Draco in this story. It is so dark and he is so nasty. But he is doing it cus he loves her.

    Please please I know you said no seqaul but just one more they have to find each other

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  • From ANON - Paige on September 19, 2007
    Ooooh you should really make a sequal. About... Maybe the war is over, and they get back together or something! Somehow...

    It would be really sweet. (in the "awww..." kind of way.)
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  • From ANON - geo on September 19, 2007
    As sad as I am that there is not epilog, I loved it anyways. Thanks for writing! I always love your work.

    geo
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  • From WendelinTheWeird on September 19, 2007
    Hi! I have read silencio as well as this and I will just say this before I go on, 'UPDATE SILENCIO'.
    Anyway back to Master, it was a great piece of writing and liked how the story progressed, I am not in anyway a Draco/Hermoine shipper so I was kinda hoping that he would be an arsehole and NOT love her, for a change. But all the same the ending was bittersweet and cute in a sickly way. Seriously though great story, with a couple of moments where I felt exactly what was going on ie the poor girl being raped by the Death Eaters. I was immersed in the story and that shows how great a writer you are!
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