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Reviews for A Very Good Occlumens

By : InkStainedWretch
  • From sheherazade on September 25, 2007
    Lily stands no chance against sex god Severus, does she? That was lovely, thanks! Can't wait for more.
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  • From MidnightLilly on September 24, 2007
    naughty=)
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  • From sheherazade on September 21, 2007
    Quoting Adam Ant will always get my attention. Sigh.

    '"You didn't think I was in this for purely unselfish reasons, did you?" he said, letting her feel how swollen and thick those particular reasons were just now.' Classic. How funny. And she is fighting her attraction to him soooo hard, bless her. Ha ha.

    Excellent to see Bellatrix get hers as well; I bet that little incident was the talk of the male Death Eaters for years afterwards.

    But you can't leave me hanging like this, dammit! Update soonest! This has become a favourite with me very quickly.
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  • From MidnightLilly on September 20, 2007
    There you go=)
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  • From sheherazade on September 20, 2007
    Ah, great, I love that this is continuing. It's a premise that could lead in all sorts of interesting directions, after all.

    "I don't know how much more praise a Slytherin can take" - great line! I want to see if he can bring Lily round or not. Please continue.
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  • From MidnightLilly on September 18, 2007
    you should write more to this fic.
    I would like to see more of their marriage
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  • From sheherazade on September 18, 2007
    Very nice! I loved the touch of Sev smoking after sex - 'Accio fags' indeed. LOL.

    This is a much more satisfactory version of events than the canon one we were fobbed off with. Are you going to write any longer pieces?
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