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Reviews for A Very Good Occlumens

By : InkStainedWretch
  • From sleepyheadless on March 20, 2010
    it was very good.
    sad ending.
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  • From missanimegrl on February 22, 2010
    I've got to tell you, I enjoyed this fic. Its hard to find good Snape/Lily fictions that are both hot and very believable. I'm sad that she didn't live longer, but that makes it more tragic, that he finally had her, for a brief time, but lost her anyway. And actually -almost- follows canon ;) I'll make a note, to others reading (or rereading), I can't help but think of the song 'Its All Coming Back To Me' by Celine Dion for this story's 'theme'. It fits so well, with Lily remembering how she cared about him, and the two of them opening their hearts (and bodies, lol) to one another. So perhaps when reading over their first love scene again, have it playing. ^.^ adds a lot of ambiance.
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on February 11, 2008
    Wonderful! Humor and tragedy together in a mere eight chapters. "I'm catholic in my tastes." Indeed. I think you did an amazing job of really capturing that character, the Death Eater/Slytherin and the lost boy.
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  • From Savaial on January 23, 2008
    What a great way to look at this love story. You turned Snape into Severus with this one. I really, really enjoyed this pairing. I have a feeling though that you could make me believe he loved anyone you chose, you write him so well. Dark eroticism Severus Snape. Excellent work.
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  • From ANON - mel on November 14, 2007
    That was absolutely amazing! It was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job!
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  • From sheherazade on October 20, 2007
    Poor Severus; nothing's ever allowed to go right for him, is it? Was so sad when he realised Lily was pregnant. *Sob*

    I like the way it makes a more realistic explanation for his turning against Voldemort (and not being too impressed with Harry either).

    This was a lovely story; every element was perfectly realised, and beautifully written too. Definitely looking forward to more from you; hope the ideas are coming thick and fast there.
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  • From ANON - Rosedown on October 19, 2007
    So, so, so fugging good.
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  • From sheherazade on October 19, 2007
    Oh, happiness, an update! And the story goes on.

    This is great - I can just imagine Snape's pictures of torment on the wall at Spinners End; I like how unimpressed he is at Lily's efforts to introduce a woman's touch. A bit of tension, a bit of angst, a lot of VERY HOT sex and a well-judged emotional moment at the end. This has it all.

    And Snape is smokin' (literally)!
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  • From chelleybelle on October 18, 2007
    great chapter! you are doing a really good job building up their love...i can't wait to see what severus has planned to defy voldemort.
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  • From sheherazade on October 03, 2007
    Wow. Did I mention that I love this story? I'm so happy there's going to be more. It's sexy AND funny and with a totally IC Snape - my favourite combination. So I'm glad you ran out of time (but sad it's nearly finished).

    "Her body began to sum up non-verbally." Great line. His use of the Langlock was very good, as was his reading of Lily's irate thoughts. Mmm. Accio Bed, eh? Update soon!
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  • From chelleybelle on October 03, 2007
    i just read it all and i loved it...can't wait to see what you do...i've never read any stories where Lily lived...its kind of weird, but i like it...gives me great ideas for something though...lol
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  • From chelleybelle on October 03, 2007
    just read the first chapter and I loved it! Great job.
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  • From MidnightLilly on October 02, 2007
    If they had a child I bet he would be stronger than Harry. I believe Harry got his strength from his mother, he may look like James but he acts nothing like him.
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  • From ANON - Rosedown on October 02, 2007
    So, so, so good. I'm glad you haven't finished the plot bunny yet.
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  • From serenagold on September 27, 2007
    Fantastic!
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