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  • From ANON - tONI on August 28, 2012
    This was an awesome adaptation. I enjoy both series and really like how you handled the meshing. Explains a lot of creatures :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2011
    "Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information."
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  • From lordscifikaos on September 14, 2009
    Hi,
    I found your story by error, but I like it very much. There exist very few Children of the Earth fanfiction and I like how you've developped the characters. Seems awhile since you've update, so I don't think you update anymore. I still wanted to say great work.
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  • From MASilverwolf on August 30, 2008
    Oooh! I can't wait to see what happens next! And I loved the 'can I at least eat him?' bit. It was hilarious. The ribbing from Ekwus to the men was funny too.

    ~M.A.S~
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2008
    Great story! I`ve read both Harry Potter and the Earths children-books, but it never occured to me that those stories could be combined. Your story is very entertaining, with all sorts of surprising and wild things happening. Just crazy! Now I`m wondering how Luna and the women will deal with the more "traditional" men as the clan evolves. Don`t we all know a Durc or a Grev out there... The incident with the penguin was just priceless! Poor guy, served him right lol.
    You are doing av great job with this and I`m looking forward to every new update. Hang in there!


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  • From Alpacamom on August 09, 2008
    I just found your story, and find it as wonderful as the original clan books. Great job!
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  • From swirly on November 12, 2007
    Great chapters. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From blackkitsue on November 04, 2007
    i love this story its the best
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  • From swirly on October 21, 2007
    This is really interesting. I've always liked Luna. Can't wait to see what happens next. Could you email me when you update? Thanks, ^.^~
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  • From LunaSimi on October 16, 2007
    Nearing the end of Clan of the Cave Bear are you going to go into the second book Valley of Horses? Can't wait for the next update.

    =^_^=
    Tigeress
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  • From on October 01, 2007
    wow ive missed a lot since my internet crapped out on me! i love where you are taking this, but it feels like you are piling the events on top of one another too quickly. ive read all of the Earth's Children and HP books, and its a little confusing even for me! dont be afraid to put in a little bit of narrative in between major events; it gives the story a more realistic feel and it also gives the reader a 'moment' to assimilate what's going on and orient themselves to the new character dynamics. creb and luna - totally didnt see that one coming, but the pairing is strangely appropriate. im really interested in how broud takes all this and if brun gives up his leadership and broud goes apeshit on both ayla and luna like in TCotCB. keep going with this one, your premise concerning magic and the Clan is freakin fascinating and i cant wait to see how it ends up!
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  • From LunaSimi on September 30, 2007
    Always good i simply can't wait i'm always checking everyday simply hoping to see that a new chapter has been added.

    Tigeress
    =^_^=
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  • From MrGalion on September 24, 2007
    So far so good.
    I'd like to see how this goes.
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  • From LunaSimi on September 23, 2007
    Impressive just as i expected. So are you pairing Creb with Luna? It would make a bit of since. I hope that you contine and update soon!

    =^_^=
    Tigeress
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  • From MrGalion on September 22, 2007
    Okay to start this out I love your works.
    Secound is I have read the earth children's series.
    Now where to go with this I have no idea. My favorite was The Mammoth Hunters.
    These two stories will be extremly hard to intertwine.
    I have no recommendations of how to do this but I suggest not diverging to far from Cannon in begining and keeping the "oh it's this way b/c it's my story" or "I need it to fit so I changed that" down to a minimum so as not destroy the story.

    Hope that made sence
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