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Reviews for Is This Love?

By : Daylightdemon
  • From Watcho on September 26, 2007
    Definitely build up their story. Remember...Draco is an asshole, it's really hard to believe, and rather cheesy when he's all kissy kissy. It could be a really good story...but it's not there yet. Keep working on it.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 21, 2007
    No suspense..who is Ana? Why should we care...you need to expand on that and then give us a reason to care about this couple. the sex scene is kinda abrupt and outta nowhere with no passion or build up. Keep trying though.
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