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Reviews for A Finer Unconsciousness

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on May 20, 2015
    Awsome, brilliant, amazing.

    Thank you.
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  • From RRose on May 25, 2012
    Beautiful! The ending was perfect, didn't need to get any further then that.
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  • From moodysavage on January 18, 2012
    This had a real mellow and sweet tone to it. I really really enjoyed reading this.
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  • From ANON - Aynessa on November 12, 2010
    That was beautiful beyond words. I love how you were able to convey everything they meant with just their actions and looks alone...they spent 7 years getting everything wrong by talking, and now they finally got it right without talking at all. Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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  • From MaskedLily on September 16, 2009
    I really like this one. Its simple and sweet. It shows how people can change just from a simple gesture. Congats and much love =)
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  • From callistianstar on July 26, 2008
    That was quite...soothing. Only two real occasions of talking between at that only included "call me draco" and a spell basically and that made this awesome. I enjoyed that. Their lack of verbal words made this quite beautiful and is a true testament to your ability to write.
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  • From Diane on March 19, 2008
    That was really different and quite amazing. To see them communicate like that was really interesting. I see stuff like that all day because everyone on campus has their iPods in their ears, you have to learn to talk without speaking. That's neither here not there. You picked out so many little things, little gestures, and gave them so much meaning. Your writing's amazing and your skills make me so jealous.
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on March 06, 2008
    Beautiful. Truly, honestly, beautiful. I can never get enough of your stories.
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  • From LeeB on February 08, 2008
    The story just *flows.* Every step is Just Right - as the relationship develops, I look back and couldn't see it happening in any other way. I only wish this one could have been longer: but there was no place that needed anything else.
    Great job.
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  • From ANON - Fuzzy bears on September 23, 2007
    That was niiiiccce. I feel kinda warm and fuzzy inside. Aw. I think you hit the spot with a birthday present. It certainly made my day.
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  • From ANON - Myra on September 23, 2007
    Oh my god. This story was, certainly, absolutely one of the BEST Harry/Draco one-shot I've read ever. My god, I LOVED it so effin much. I just simply loved the way you write, the amazing storyline despite this being a short story, the unique sets of Harry and Draco's point of views, but most of all I just loved their very little, YET absolutely perfect interactions. They didn't need words to understand each other, it was just merely actions and mutual understanding that had been going on between them. I really really liked how Harry just simply believed in Draco when he didn't even have any reason to be, I mean they weren't even what you'd call as friends exactly, just two pretty much opposite individuals, but yet he still stood up for him against those (stupid) accusations, and hell, even resigned himself because of the unfair judgment made towards Draco. Just wow, I've re-read this story for like three times just now. Amazing job, and keep on writing!
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  • From thrnbrooke on September 23, 2007
    Wonderful! I soooo hope there's a chapter 2!
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  • From Annie on September 22, 2007
    You have no idea how lovely I think this story is. I am so glad you didn't let anyone speak, lest it should ruin the whole atmosphere. And the way you described Harry and Draco was absolutely stunning. The last line was perfect. Fabulous job! :D
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on September 22, 2007
    This was really good, of course all your stories are. But this one came off so sweet!
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