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Reviews for A ‘very little’ Happy Ending

By : Kerstin
  • From thrnbrooke on February 05, 2010
    Soooo need chapter 8!!! Take a break and study and then write! They are soooo cute!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 29, 2009
    Six more chapters? *Very Happy Now!* Can't wait for chapter 7!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 17, 2008
    No need to thank me!!! I love your stories!!! Soo going to miss this one!!! Wasn't ready for it to end!!! And what an ending! Wow! That was beautiful!!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2008
    Wow! Fantastic! I sooo need chapter 6!
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  • From Toddy on January 26, 2008
    Good story.
    As English is your second language, perhaps a good beta might help?
    For instance: 'foot' when you meant 'food', and some of your tenses became mixed, as well.
    English is my first language, however I read through my stories at least twelve times, before I upload them.
    Even this short missive was altered three or four times before sending.
    Please tell us some more stories, you have a very good sense of narrative. You managed the tension between the two protagonists extremely well. I like your idea about co-operation between the houses. I liked to see the Malfoy's in a different light, too.
    Looking forward to the next tale.
    Whitmore.

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  • From bananasforyou on January 26, 2008
    it was very sweet. i talk randomly about everything!

    *waves back*
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 26, 2008
    His left ear was pointed with at last six rings. This is from chapter two, when Draco saw Harry on the train. That is why I asked if Harry had creature blood. Draco was thinking of all the ways Harry had changed. Harry has "pointed" ears. I was thinking with pointed ears he was an elf or fey. Sorry I made a wrong assumption.
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  • From DestinyDragon on November 22, 2007
    I love this story!! Please update again soon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 13, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 4! Poor clueless Harry! I'm glad he's figured it out!
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  • From bananasforyou on November 09, 2007
    nio i mean yes but i like it!
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  • From dracoharry4life on November 09, 2007
    I know Draco is part Veela, does Harry have creature blood? His reaction when he saw Nott holding Draco made it seem so. He kept thinking it was wrong and no one else was allowed to touch or hold Draco. Like it was a law or something. He doesn't know he's Draco's mate. I was thinking maybe he sees Draco as his mate, even if he don't know why.
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  • From DracoHarry on October 08, 2007
    I am so confused right now. I have no clue what is going on. Draco is just to far out of character. That and you keep jumping from one thing to the next without really explaining anything. I like the story plot though. What I understand of it anyhow. Keep up the O.K. work.

    Kat
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  • From bananasforyou on October 07, 2007
    im staying!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 07, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 3! Harry called him sweetheart! Poor Harry stays confused around Draco!
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  • From blackpaddy on October 02, 2007
    wow! I love the plot and ideas behind this story but it is a little bit hard to read because of all the editing that needs to be done. Normally, I would offer to help out but I'm uber busy at the moment! Good story, just some touch-ups required... also, minor point but Dumbledore showed Harry the prophecy after 5th year, not 4th..
    Stef
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