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By : superrogue17
  • From ANON - sunsstorm on November 12, 2007
    I hope you intend on continuing this story. I love how it isn't the typical marriage law fic.
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  • From Rannapulla on October 30, 2007
    I love your story! and want more... please. i love how you explaned nevilles parents ( horribe thing that happened). I love it !....
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  • From bluezauza on October 28, 2007
    Nice story! more please, soon
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  • From ANON - Deirdre on October 26, 2007
    I love Law marriage's fics! i liked the star :D want to see what malfoy do to get hermione
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  • From chelleybelle on October 26, 2007
    I just caught up on all the chapters, great job...I love where you are going with this story...I love the intrigue and the plotting that everyone is involved in. I can't wait until you have Draco tell Pansy off...it should be rather entertaining...who will you match everyone else with? hurrry and write, I am dying to see whats next!!!
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  • From mhaj78 on October 26, 2007
    great chap! and great advice from "little weasley". hmm i'm curious if neville WILL pursue revenge... this was a great chapter, more help for the plot and longer than others! thanks!
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  • From Utopia on October 26, 2007
    [regarding chapter two]

    A very short chapter, but the plot was accute and revealing.

    Draco is being wonderfully honest, he doesn't have to be polite to Ron and Harry - but he IS doing.

    Harry's slythein nature is showing through! Nice to see him being sneaky and cunning! However, Ron seems to be one step behind.

    10/10
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  • From Utopia on October 26, 2007
    [regarding chapter one]

    I adore your writing style, it is from Draco's point of view - but written from the eye of an all-seeing narrator who is (like the reader) watching with amusement!

    I like his logic in his choice - but not his reasons, he wants her because she is the best academically and the brain behind the trio that brought down Voldemort; he knows nothing of her personality, likes, dislikes, hopes, dreams... in reality they are strangers. but, he did realise that good lucks and money won't impress her, and is swallowing his pride to ask for help.

    Nice to see it was all an act (being mean, that is) to keep Lucius happy and off his back - I had wondered... but Hermione's Gryffindor bravery would probably view this as cowardice, rather than personal safety.

    He's asking the Gryffs for help? Is he taking a chair and whip to tame the lions who will view him as a nice rump steak? lol.

    Has Ron thought about asking for her - or hasn't he realised she's female yet?
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  • From kazfeist on October 17, 2007
    A great story, so far. One question, though. Since they are Seventh Years, the reference to OWL-level Potions back a couple of chapters ago was a mistake, right? They should be in NEWT-level Potions classes, right? Other than that, nice plot points in the 12th chapter -- I liked the way you had the Longbottoms' torture spur Draco's defection. Looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From dells on October 14, 2007
    I like the thought behind this plot Draco owing favors and the fear of what Hermonine will do to them if she finds out. I have a soft spot for the marriage law fics. I have read quite a few. Please update agian soon.

    Dells

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  • From ANON - Donavonee on October 13, 2007
    I am really enjoying your story. But, this chapter excelled. Brilliant, poor Neville. Look forward to reading more. I really can't see how you are going to get Hermione to see Draco in a good light at the moment. Best wishes,
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 13, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From SeayKat on October 13, 2007
    Loving it so far! I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 12, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Rosamund on October 12, 2007
    I'm still enjoying this story very much! Please keep updating ;)
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