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Reviews for Detention with Professor Lupin

By : Soap1
  • From ANON - Uptonogood&you on December 09, 2016

    Somehow I get the feeling Snape drank a little polyjuice potion so he could do "the little know it all's" detention himself and make her scared of Lupin in the process. I like this story BTW.


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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on July 26, 2012
    that is horrible. Good writing but i love a nice and sweet (dominant) Remus Lupin
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on December 05, 2011
    not entirely sure if i like this story. It was well written, but Lupin was so very OOC and i would have liked to know WHY he felt the need to rape Hermione, was he Impero'd? a deatheater? Snape in disguise? i just felt that there was a lot missing which made it hard to enjoy. sorry, do another chapter explaining things, it would be nice.
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  • From EveAlli on January 14, 2011
    I don't usually read stories like that, and I wanted to stop and hit the 'back' button many times throughout the story.

    That being said, you know a story is horrifyingly good when you want to stop reading, but you just can't bring yourself to actually do it.

    ~E.A.~
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  • From Heidi191976 on January 01, 2009
    This was great. Since you didn't say it was a oneshot, maybe you could write more to it. I think it would be interesting if Remus continues to have his way with Hermione throughout the year. Then he could find ways to be with her over the summer and even the following years. It would also be interesting if Snape would figure out what Remus is doing and instead of reporting him to Dumbledore or the Ministry, he, too, could begin taking advantage of Hermione as well.
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  • From Warslasher on December 31, 2008
    For some reason I found this story unbelievably funny. It's probably because I read so many stories where their is ginny or hermione bashing and it end up making me wish their characters would get what was comming to them every once in awhile.

    You think you can make one with Ginny too? Why did you have Lupin make her stop screaming he had the room soundproofed so it's not like it mattered. After you do a Ginny one can you do a Luna one where he convinces her he needs some lovin because he is snackle toothe whatever Luna always talks about.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 09, 2008
    love the story hun.
    poor mione
    so sad
    funy how he warned her that it was going to hurt...like he cared
    nice job
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  • From BlazeOfGlory15 on October 20, 2007
    this was a good fic, very realistic, but could you write another chapter from hermione's viewpoint?
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  • From ursomalevolent on October 10, 2007
    very well written. kind of eerie. it would be really cool if you continued it. with a snape detention, perhaps? or a lupin detention with harry?

    keep up the good work

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  • From Hermyone on September 30, 2007
    Please continue that was good.
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  • From kmplease on September 25, 2007
    Scary but good, I think you should keep writing.
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  • From on September 24, 2007
    Heh. You sure made Prof. Lupin a jerk. One thing I might mention ... hymens are not located *inside* the vagina. They cover the very opening. I think this article might be very helpful for you:

    http://community.livejournal.com/writers_orgasm/584.html
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