Reviews for Dead PhoenixBy : LostPetunia |
This is a good illustration of what can go wrong in a D/s relationship. When the Master has trained the slave to ignore their needs in favor of his own to such an extent that the slave will continue a scene that is traumatizing due to guilt or fear, that's when you know you have a bad Master and an abusive relationship. If Severus was a good Master, he would have stopped this before Draco even had a chance to touch Harry. He would have discussed this scene and got Harry's agreement before bounding and blinding and stripping Harry and then pulled the guilt card "Do you trust me? Do you love me?" How can a slave thus trained say "no"? It was coercion, not submission.
On the other hand, Harry should have used his words well before things went that far. He has a responsibility to himself to be safe. Obviously, Severus as Master did not train Harry in that fact. Such a huge failure.
On balance though, the majority of fault lies with Severus. He had numerous opportunities to notice that his slave was not enjoying this and was infact quite upset. Severus did not act in the best intererest of his slave as a good Master is supposed to do. The Slave's submission is a trust that Severus failed. The Master has the ultimate resposibility and he failed.
My heart was breaking for Harry thorughout the story. Quite engaging of my emotions I must say. It's a sign of a good story, no matter the technical aspects of the story.
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