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Reviews for Dead Phoenix

By : LostPetunia
  • From ANON - bloopfish on September 30, 2007
    Wow, this is fantastic. I'm really curious about what's going on in Severus' head during all of this, did he ever care about Harry or did he really not notice how much this was hurting him? Oh please, oh please write more? *puppy eyes*
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  • From sanda on September 30, 2007
    good story, how does he "count the flickers on the ceiling, cast by the bedside candle," when he is blinded by the spell?, bye
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  • From ANON - Jo on September 30, 2007
    Wow. I know it's labeled as a oneshot, but I'd really like to see more.
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  • From satine1313 on September 30, 2007
    Brilliant, but please continue. I really would like to see how Snape tries to get Harry back.
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  • From Jilliane on September 30, 2007
    Well, that was a surprise. I thought it was going to be Lucius, not Draco. I'm not all that wild about Draco/Harry, but I do think this was well written, good on the angst, and I could just see the hurt in Harry's eyes as he muttered his safe word at the end. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From ANON - mnfm on September 30, 2007
    I think you should continue with this story. It's to good for just one chapter!
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  • From HarryVik on September 30, 2007
    very good. thought i would give anything for this to be a longer serie. maybe how Severus tries to win Harry back and so on. Great story. I hope to read more of your creations.
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  • From ANON - Sunflower on September 30, 2007
    second chapter

    oh lord please continue this

    please!
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  • From AislinnNicole on September 29, 2007
    Just as a suggestion, you may want to put a Non-con warning on this fic and a D/s (if you don't already have that one). Also you may want to tell the readers this is a Drarry fic too... I adore Snarry, but I'm really not into Draco/Harry. At the very least mention this is a threesome if you want Harry's Master to be a surprise.

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  • From smellysocks on September 29, 2007
    i... really liked it... was it just a oneshot or are you going to write more?

    the end was really good, when even after all of that, it was the kiss coming from draco that finally broke harry from severus... yeah?


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