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Reviews for Fallen Star (Sequel to Shooting Star) COMPLETE

By : slashpervert
  • From QueenB on October 26, 2007
    Ch. 12 Goodness, that was frightening! I had expected Harry to be a victim somehow. But he was always a fighter; he probably wouldn't have succumbed so easily. The attack has altered matters greatly. It's startling to have Mark drawn into their world but I suppose it was inevitable given his attraction to Harry; it's just happened sooner than expected.

    However, that definitely makes Mark a weak link. If Death Eaters come looking for Harry and Draco, Mark could be in danger or he might give away the secret without meaning to do so. Still, this might show Mark, more than anything else, that Draco and Harry belong together and to each other.

    I'm waiting to see how Draco will react when he wakes up and sees Mark there.
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  • From anniea on October 26, 2007
    but what happens when mark is attacked by D.E. and has the info extracted from him, sorry i'm being pessimistic. love4 how well he took it. update soon *kisses*
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 26, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 13! Mark helped them and Harry used magic! I hope this doesn't backfire on them! Those men knew tooo much about Draco. How?
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  • From QueenB on October 20, 2007
    Ch. 11 Whew! For awhile I was terrified that David would revert to punishing Harlan again for coming back late. But it seems that there was no need to worry about it. It does seem as if opening up to is making them more capable of dealing with their problems without resorting to violence. I'm looking forward to seeing that date. :)
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  • From anniea on October 18, 2007
    wow david took it pretty well (please note the sarcastic tone) update soon love *kisses*
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 18, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 12! Harry should have told him about the kiss. Mark can throw that up at Draco!
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  • From iluvmysato on October 16, 2007
    Very good story. I just finished reading all of Shooting Star and enjoyed it tremendously. Looking forward to your next update.
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  • From alleycat88 on October 16, 2007
    Oh my gosh! I hope David doesn't kill Mark!
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 16, 2007
    Oh this is bad!!! Very very bad! I sooo need chapter 11! I knew it! Mark kissed him!
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  • From anniea on October 16, 2007
    yes harlan/harry held his own against mark, nothing bad happened, now exactly how does david/draco take it. loving the story update soon *kisses*
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  • From willowgirl on October 16, 2007
    Oh no! Harry is going to get it now. Draco is never going to let Harry out on his own again.
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  • From plotbunny69 on October 16, 2007
    Speechless...amazing!
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  • From QueenB on October 15, 2007
    Ch. 9 Draco really IS the more knowledgeable of the two. I haven't read all the JKR books so I don't know where Harry stands in terms of knowledge. But he did always come off as being more physically inclined than cerebral. I guess intelligence isn't always something that's needed in heroes, although it's a bit disappointing to find authors treating Harry like he's witless stump.

    His desire for friendship is genuine, though, and you can see where it comes from. He's used to having friends as a kind of support group around him. Draco may be a tender lover but that's not quite the same and the bond means that he'll usually take the role of the aggressor (although this chapter shows Harry being more forceful). Harry wants a bit more equality in his relationships even if he doesn't say so; having friends will supply that lack. Since he's not necessarily the thinking type, he hasn't said this to Draco so the blond doesn't understand.

    Draco is probably right about Mark's true intentions though and Harry is being naive if he thinks otherwise. Well, I'm sure Mark will make his feelings clear. He doesn't strike me as being the patient type.
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  • From anniea on October 14, 2007
    wow david's is really trying to be there for harlan! that's has to be so hard for him to just let harlan go out with that "mark" fellow. update soon love *kisses*
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  • From on October 14, 2007
    Oh no! What's going to happen? Please let Harry be ok!!! Just a night out, right?
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