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Reviews for Fallen Star (Sequel to Shooting Star) COMPLETE

By : slashpervert
  • From ANON - qwerty on December 12, 2007
    nice
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  • From QueenB on December 12, 2007
    Ch. 21 Goshums. That was...beyond hot. I've only written one story with a threesome and it wasn't as good as this. Dang, I need more practice...with the writing, I mean. :P~ ~ ~ ~
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 12, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 22!!!
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  • From Ellanath on December 10, 2007
    Oh wow is Harry/Harlan ever sexy taking the lead in this chapter.Aren't they just horny little devils and so uninhibited too! As always, I love reading your stories!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2007
    You're going to kill Harry or Draco, aren't you? D: I just realised that you have Character Death in your spoilers (but not with the D/H live you have for your other stories...) *bawls*
    So I'm guessing that one of them ends up with Mark, then. Perhaps Draco? xD There's something poetic about that. The man who brought them together dies. ;-;

    I hope I'm wrong. I want both of them to live. D: I guess I'll just have to see...
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 09, 2007
    You sooo blew me away! I sooo need chapter 21!
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  • From ANON - Rettavex on December 09, 2007
    I love a semi jealous Draco also. Those conflicting emotions felt true. It is unfortunate he is unwilling to show Harry the same pleasures of topping that he gets. That's relationships though--straight, gay, or whatever. It is hard for both parties to give up a little trust, control and vulnerability. It'd be interesting to see what would happen if Harry wanted to top more after this session with Mark. What would that do to their relationship.
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  • From ANON - Rettavex on December 09, 2007
    Awww, just when it was getting good... oh the waiting and waiting. I am so like harry. Impatient.
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  • From QueenB on December 08, 2007
    Ch. 20 Oh my. Sex is somehow always more intimate when personal feelings come into play. I hope they can get along after this. But I wanted Mark to finish that picture! :P
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  • From ANON - Bloodseneschal on December 08, 2007
    Thanks for the cliifie, you sadist bastard! LOL! Love ya'

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  • From Leentjef on December 08, 2007
    very very very god chapter
    i really liked it a lot
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 07, 2007
    I kinda wanted more of the nude painting first before all the action happened... you know, suspense. But whatever. Good chapter.
    update
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  • From xXBrokenDreamsXx on December 03, 2007
    Okay, I LOOOOOVED Shooting Star. I've only read a couple of chapters of this story but the Harlen/David thing bothers me. I understand they they had to change names and if they only called each other that (along with others of course) then I could live with that. But I would think you would have still described them with Draco/Harry. For example, Harry and Draco walked down the street, "What would you like for dinner David?" Harry asked. "I'm not sure Harlen but that place looks good." Draco said pointing to a restraunt across the street. I don't think it would confuse people and I honestly think you would have a lot more readers for the sequel. But it's your story and other than that little thing I love it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 26, 2007
    Lovely chapters. The nude painting and what comes after will be interesting, to say the least.
    update!
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  • From QueenB on November 26, 2007
    Ch. 19 I agree with Kae. Harry has the right to have sex how he wants it and Draco has already proven that he's amenable to an open relationship. Demanding that Harry allow nobody else to penetrate him sounds an awful lot like the dictatorial way he used to order him about when Harry was a mere slave.

    Harry SEEMS more or less willing to keep his body exclusively for Draco. But the way he talks about Mark makes you wonder just how far he'd let things go if Draco weren't around to stop them.
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