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Reviews for Just Pretend

By : unknown001397
  • From bananasforyou on November 18, 2007
    so hott!
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  • From ANON - Tank on November 18, 2007
    is cool that Harry is honest with Ginny, that shit will bite you in the ass later lol
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  • From ANON - Tank on November 17, 2007
    Ace story. The only thing more fucked up then this recent turn of events is Hermione being....fucking mental cause you can't hate the bookworm...just fucked up circumstances is all. Great stuff.
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  • From ANON - greywings on November 15, 2007
    you've got a great story, but you should check for grammatical errors. It's hard to understand.
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  • From luvhp on November 14, 2007
    I'm so sorry, but the grammatical errors in this have me scratching my head. It's very confusing trying to understand what is going on.
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 14, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 24, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From mhaj78 on October 23, 2007
    oh, so what did draco get hermione?! i can't wait to see!!!
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  • From luvhp on October 23, 2007
    Good chapter,a lthough there were alot of grammatical errors in this chapter for some reason.
    Otherwise, WOW< what happened to Hermione??
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  • From mhaj78 on October 23, 2007
    okay yikes! can't wait to hear about what was going through his head as he watched that--lots of people freeze up in emergency situations like that...
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  • From mhaj78 on October 22, 2007
    thanks for the update! :)
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  • From chelleybelle on October 22, 2007
    poor draco is smitten and hermioine is not sure of her feelings...good chapter...i liked the sex scene...at least the one sided sex scene, lol
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  • From chelleybelle on October 22, 2007
    oooh...naked hermione...what will draco do next?
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  • From chelleybelle on October 22, 2007
    good chapter...i like the pink hair at the end...the kissing scenes were great, i can imagine what everyone around hogwarts is thinking with those two making out...poor ron, he got what he deserved, didn't he?
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  • From chelleybelle on October 22, 2007
    your story has great promise...i like the idea of it and i am looking forward to seeing where it is going...i think that you need a beta though...your grammar is a bit off and there are some spelling errors. don't let this upset you, the story itself is still great, and a beta can only make it better.
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